Quick Lil Freestyle

[B-Bear]

Though it was a while since I've dropped a written piece, so here's a lil freestyle..


we show our grandparents respect cause they're older and smarter
I nearly ashamed thinkin of how we're growing colder and harder
they defended our nation from the invasion of the nazi ideology
when all hope was shattered they proved their supreme superiority
we reap the treasures from the trees they planted outta their blood
I wanna keep the pressure to realize our hands are covered in mudd
the pride of our nation doesn't come from the buildings or resources
it's flowin in our veins, but all we mine is hate burning like torches
i understand things have changed, but the plans can be rearranged
our heart isn't totally estranged, but it lacks the national feelin
breathin the same air, celebrating our independence day together
but besides from that? I see a lot of things that can be done better
where did the courtesy go and what happened to proper behaviour
why did your grandma always outbrain ya, cause she had the background
to make a statement, buried under the humility is where the hate went
children are raised to protect themselves through lethal violence
what i'm witnessing through my eye lense brings silence and heartbreak
we're not forsaken, but we need to discover our moment of peace
cause opponents in the streets can turn out to be your guardian angel
I know it's hard to believe something that sounds illogical to u
but the obstacles is inside u, it's just a cell in ya head connected to
your brain tellin u it isn't possible, like murders at a hospital
Think bout it..

[B-Bear]

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[B-Bear]

What happened to FEEDBACK on this site?

[Prophet]

That's fucked up, no one left any feedback! I thought this was dope, I'm really impressed considering this was a freestyle. And it flowed very nicely, good job.
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we show our grandparents respect cause they're older and smarter
I nearly ashamed thinkin of how we're growing colder and harder

they defended our nation from the invasion of the nazi ideology
when all hope was shattered they proved their supreme superiority

it's flowin in our veins, but all we mine is hate burning like torches
i understand things have changed, but the plans can be rearranged
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Those were my favorite lines, overall this was pretty good, I give it an 8/10

[lilblayze]

yo bro dat was dope da whole thing was fire keep doin wat ur doin bro

[B-Bear]

Thanks for feedbacl ya'll..


Uppin!!