Welcome to Illest Lyrics forum established in 2005.
----
Free Vapes

STOMP, new Language Arts track

Release your best recorded material and let the world hear your talent. It doesn't matter what level you are on - you will get constructive feedback to increase your skills.

Moderator: Loon E Lou

Forum rules
Embed your soundclick video players with [soundclick]Song Id[/soundclick]. You can also just put [soundclick]Embed Code[/soundclick].

Please go back and fix as many of your old songs as you want.
Post Reply
User avatar
Mephisto
Potential Emcee
Offline
Posts: 32
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:18 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

STOMP, new Language Arts track

Post by Mephisto »

<div>
<a href='http://www.soundclick.com/languageartschi'>
<div></div></a>
<div><object type="application/x-shockwave-flash" allowScriptAccess="never" allowNetworking="internal" height="60" width="473" data="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="allowScriptAccess" value="never">
<param name="allowNetworking" value="internal">
<param name="movie" value="http://www.soundclick.com/player/V2/mp3player.swf">
<param name="loop" value="false">
<param name="menu" value="false">
<param name="quality" value="high">
<param name="wmode" value="transparent">
<param name="flashvars" value="playType=single&songid=5583211&q=hi&ext=1&ref=11">
<param name="scale" value="noscale">
<param name="salign" value="b">
<param name="bgcolor" value="#000000">
</object></div></div>


Just another track that we did tell me what you think thanks.
User avatar
Momeijah
Supreme Lyricist
Offline
Posts: 6964
Joined: Tue Aug 22, 2006 12:32 am
Wins: 38
Losses: 7

Post by Momeijah »

This Was ill.

The Beat Was Siiiick. Lyrics Were Nice And Both Yall Were in Time With The Beat. Sounds Pretty Professional And if i Was To Choose a Fav Verse id Probably Say The 1st Dude, He Came a Bit Nicer, Donno Which One Of Em u Are Though Lol. Keep it Up And Drop Some More Tracks.
Image
Image

AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
User avatar
Mephisto
Potential Emcee
Offline
Posts: 32
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:18 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Post by Mephisto »

Thanks for the feed, I'm actually not on the track its just my friends who i've been recording shit with for a long time, i just make the beats. Its just one of our tracks on our cd coming out.
User avatar
16 Micz
Disciple Of Rap.
Offline
Posts: 2446
Joined: Sat Jan 14, 2006 4:37 pm
Wins: 16
Losses: 6

Post by 16 Micz »

ummmmm seems kind weird to me, not so much feelin tha sample,very horrible start, but the lyrics and delivery is dope, although the subject has been heard 1000s of times, this was nice fam, keep em comin
User avatar
Mephisto
Potential Emcee
Offline
Posts: 32
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:18 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Post by Mephisto »

yea i allways try to be very different when i make beats, try to keep it raw and abstract. what exactly was horrible tho the whole intro into the beat or just the random weird sounds in the begining? Thanks for the feed once again, ill be sure to do the same.
User avatar
16 Micz
Disciple Of Rap.
Offline
Posts: 2446
Joined: Sat Jan 14, 2006 4:37 pm
Wins: 16
Losses: 6

Post by 16 Micz »

just the intro into the beat..
User avatar
Minos
Lyrically Inclined
Offline
Posts: 135
Joined: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:44 pm
Wins: 7
Losses: 2

Post by Minos »

Fuck That Shit About The Beat. I Think Its Hella Tight. What Your Soundclick Fam? This Ones FUCKING Dope!!! Lyrics, Flow, Beat All On Point. Like Im Saying, This Shits Like Jurassic 5.
User avatar
complexity
Elevated
Offline
Posts: 9699
Joined: Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:09 am
Wins: 48
Losses: 15
Location: Maine
Contact:

Post by complexity »

Image

Check out our Vapes for great prices.
User avatar
Mephisto
Potential Emcee
Offline
Posts: 32
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:18 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Post by Mephisto »

Thanks for the feed everyone, yea with that beat people either love it or hate it. As for our sound click we really don't even have that many songs uploaded cause we just finished combining 2 groups into one. But I'll work on that. peace
User avatar
Minos
Lyrically Inclined
Offline
Posts: 135
Joined: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:44 pm
Wins: 7
Losses: 2

Post by Minos »

Cool Shit Fam. Got Mp3s? Shit Would Be So Much Better If I Could Download It.
User avatar
Mephisto
Potential Emcee
Offline
Posts: 32
Joined: Mon Jul 16, 2007 6:18 am
Wins: 0
Losses: 0

Post by Mephisto »

I'm actually in the process of putting together a rough draft of our cd, we are suppose to be recording it in a studio for free in a month but we already have a version done we did by ourselves. Once I find a place to upload it i'll post a link so you can download the whole thing.
User avatar
Minos
Lyrically Inclined
Offline
Posts: 135
Joined: Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:44 pm
Wins: 7
Losses: 2

Post by Minos »

Word Fams.

Hit Up Www.Megaupload.Com When You Done. Easiest Way To Upload Shit.
User avatar
Young K
Elite Freestyler
Offline
Posts: 322
Joined: Wed Jul 04, 2007 9:34 pm
Wins: 3
Losses: 2
Location: PA
Contact:

Post by Young K »

this is really good...
Lyrics and the flow were on point...
9/10
Post Reply

Return to “The Booth”

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 6 guests