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It would have been a great idea and very creative had u been about 3 weeks earlier.. after chamillionaire did his thang the idea is sorta played out man..
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I thought it was still a dope drop none the less. Don't matter if it was done before or not...everybodies got a different story to tell. I thought the dopest line was...

Reporter: Man You're Crazy.. Do Your Thoughts And Emotions Ever Get Hazy? i Heard About A Teller That Caught Steel in Tha Lungs
Response: You Serious? All That Faggot Was Doin is Dealin Me Ones...i'm Sick Of Playin.. Tha Game Aint A Joke i Didnt Even Attempt To Change My Name When They Spoke


...yea. I'd have to shoot a bank teller too if they were fuckin wit me like that. Don't be wreckless and piss a nigga off when you're gettin robbed. lol But yea...good idea for a drop.
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Post by Prophet »

I agree with Kurse, even thought it was done before this was still dope. I liked it cuz Some lines were fucking funny!

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Reporter: What Were You Holdin? Did You Have A Pair Of Gloves Or Mask?

Response: My Gat Was Folded i Opened Up Shop 'Til Tha Piece Started Scoldin After i Just Shoved His Ass

Reporter: Why Did You Do it!?

Response: i Gotta Love For Cash
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Haha! shit, that line had me laughing. Overall I liked it, I thought it was entertaining.
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ill leave u feed since u did 2 me lol..well..i read above that this concept has already been amde by Chamillionaire..i havent hurd it yet but im sure its nice..anyways for tryin somethin diff ill give u credit 4 even tho u aint no Cham did this..its always good 2 see things in someone elses perspective so im glad u did this even if someone else did it b4 u...the rhyme scheme 2 me seemed a lil off track in places..like u had 2 many words in'a few lines here n there..but the story of it was cool..bit twisted lol..but anyways..it wasnt bad for what u tried 2 do..keep@it man..PeaCE
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Here's a link


http://stress.no/magazine.aspx?Nid=11201&cat=9#

Press the link, u won't understand the language anyhow.. lol..
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It's the Breaking News video I was talkin about..

But if u didn't know Cha had done it already, then it's a very good idea.. that changes the picture totally.. !!
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Post by lilblayze »

yeah dat was dope and u right dey aren't really da same
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ima lil fucked up tomorrow ill make it more detailed fo u bro
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It's the same concept man.. didn't mention anything about the title.. acutally i got the title wrong..lol.. but anyway, it's the same concept..
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Dude, the same concept is the same thing as the same idea.. and u used the exactly same idea as Cha did, only with a diff content.. end of story man.. no need to make this into something.. it just seems a lil weird that right after Cha drops his piece, u post this one and say u didn't know anything about it.. but i have no problem in believing in u, i'm just stating my point view man
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Post by B-Bear »

Argue over the internet, damn that frightening.. callin another man out because he said some mean words about a verse u wrote.. now that's hilarious! dude, i'm just stating my opinion.. if u don't like, that's u.. i couldn't have cared less..
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