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wars in iraq for oil
blood spillin for no reason on foreign soil
the worlds in turmoil
politicians wont earn loyalty until bush's term is foiled
higher learning and lost knowledge
being held hostage by psycopaths is the cost of college
the elderly bein beaten n killed..
in their own home is defeating their will
keep eatin the pills
cuz reality sucks and it just leads you to believe that evil is real

ima switch it up...

every time i patrol the halls i hold my balls
lookin for another sexually transmitted ho ta call
hold on for a second here hold my draws
while i blow my nose in cocaine and expose ya bra
hearin oh's and ah's oh no i broke ya jaw there goes the law
did i go to far ..nah i just rose the bar
sick in the head like my dome got sars
theres quick and theres dead thats why ya throat got scars

one more time...

yo yo yo.. id do tricks like a duncan yo-yo
cream filling n big p just invented the pumpkin ho-ho
fly like a do-do bird after the brink of extinction
give it some ink and a wink n my link is distinctive
put on a big hat n a beard so i can think like im lincoln
first name abraham ill rape a lamb
while i skate with bam in africa
im so bright i could give an ape a tan

thats it
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Post by complexity »

My favorite verse was the first one.

I didn't find the second one very entertaining and the last one wasn't that funny,
but it's always good to make fun of big p being fat. (lol)

I don't know how I feel about the switching it up. It kept it a little fresh, but loss the direction IMO.
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Post by Dead Silence »

agreed with plex on my favorite verse

1st verse-was deep made alot of sense 8.5/10

2nd verse-it was alright kinda simple from you 7/10

3rd verse-better than the 2nd one but not much still kinda simple 7.5/10
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