When All Falls Apart Snippet

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Wed Aug 15, 2007 9:48 pm

Here's a snippet of my first ever recorded track.. i'll be posting the full version as soon as it's finished

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Wed Aug 15, 2007 10:34 pm

The snippet wasn`t really long enough to get proper feel for the track. But it seemed pretty good. You rode the beat well and i would imagine the lyrics will be on point going by your writtens. Its good to hear someone else doing audio. Look forward to hearin more audio from you

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Wed Aug 15, 2007 10:35 pm

I was very interested to hear this.

You sound a little to robotic.

The lyrics are nice as hell. It's crazy the amount you have elevated lyrically.

You seem to have a nice flow, but something seems to be wrong with the voice.

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Wed Aug 15, 2007 11:47 pm

I know it's reeeally short.. but wasn't able to cutter only took about 20 sec.. but i'll be finishin the track pretty soon, prolly on thursday, then i'll post it..

My voice sounding robotic.. hmmm... interesting point.. never really considered that.. u thinkin like i gotta put more attitude into my delivery or what?

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:43 pm

you foreign or something?

Mephisto · Post by **Mephisto** » Thu Aug 16, 2007 3:12 pm

Sounds pretty good, you just kinda have trouble saying a few words just gotta perfect your flow. You kinda have that laid back lazy dope sound like mf doom pretty cool. Keep at it.

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Thu Aug 16, 2007 10:14 pm

drunken jesus wrote:you foreign or something?

I'm a god damn viking dude! from the lands in the north.. i'm from norway.. lol

drunken jesus · Post by **drunken jesus** » Fri Aug 17, 2007 4:31 am

damn all this time i thought you was a corny white dude turns out you're a corny viking

main problem is your enunciation you kinda slur words together delivery and shit was straight just work on your enunciation so you saying all the words clearly

B-Bear · Post by **B-Bear** » Fri Aug 17, 2007 7:33 am

drunken jesus wrote:damn all this time i thought you was a corny white dude turns out you're a corny viking

main problem is your enunciation you kinda slur words together delivery and shit was straight just work on your enunciation so you saying all the words clearly

Gotta love the picture!

Yeah, I feel like i'm mumbling in some parts.. together with the enunciation.. but i gotta say, no braggin or nothin.. but for being a norwegian dude, i feel like i got a pretty straight pronuncaition.. it's better then A LOT of others..

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