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im so hard to deal with

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spit with an intensity gettin whats ment to be,
aint sinin to get this green & constantly wreck these beats..
and i get these freaks...playing hide the meat in fly wide jeeps,
drvie by cheif and i might drive by and provide it cheap..
why am i me?..cause of focus and determination,
wanna earn kid? show patients
cause some of these cats gats'll burn and turn you into patients..
get it? i've learned what yalls mistake-is,
yall bump gums but dont grind but still you belly-achin..
i felt the weather & played-bitch...take chances to move finaces,
and go sell sell sell or buy buy buy and straight lose your asses...
im past cash cause...im the gold standard and you so damaged,
flows established..flow and go so fast, damnit you cant grab-it...
im on my way to the casket...fuck i remain an asshole,
feel the hatred in soul waitin to blow, escapes and goes breaks-in-ya-do..
wooooo...ill fall back to calm, relax im gutter with lyrics,
you'll get cut when i spit-it, cause its so sharp..im so hard to deal with...



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cause some of these cats gats'll burn and turn you into patients..
get it? i've learned what yalls mistake-is

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Your structure was weird really.. it could be tight if u spit this to a beat.. anyway, flow was diverse.. better in the last part.. liked the content, a bit played out, but still liked it.. some nice multies here and there, pretty tight rhyme scheme, close to what i'm usin.. anyhow, a good drop.. long time no see in the written section, so appreciate that u're back! keep droppin
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Post by drunken jesus »

link rule is bullshit
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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