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http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/new-o ... t6339.html

if i left anyone out probably do a part 2 n take more time


did this up quick

ILLEST IS BACK..
who the fuck talkin bout illest is wack
in fact illest still got the dopest killas intact
feel the impact, other sites fightin wit pillows in rap
we ridin wit black masks n gat straps ta maintain
some of the hottest scripture drops ta ever grace a mainframe
simple n plain..
we heavy hitters cats from other sites bite us for weight gain
theyre pollutin the air waves
and were laughin at crews n pushin you down a staircase
we runnin shit while ya site hybernates
like we jukin in bear caves
come back fightin men that bight again
eat 3 vicodin n go on strike again
maybe my writings might offend
but i dont give a fuck ill still strike a pen
catch rh1no on the coast outside payin off harbor cops
stayin tighter than a fade at a southside barber shop
diversity in lyricism try but you couldnt hold mine
black folks accept me like im wesley snipes in a coal mine
and the white folks never snitch on guy cuz im hard ta you
they say im whiter than a fourth of july newt gingrich barbecue
now we just waitin for plex ta cut them checks again
cuz illest holds blades and ya might get cut by mexicans
we get hype and its make these clowns wonder
how we even got a chick thatll rip ya from down under
yall fagets be suckin on tube steak
while ya gettin murked by assassins we got them dudes from the u.k.
i gotta a kick in ya door libido and as ya whores eatin cheetos
we got a chick that a rip ya "sickest" heads born in puerto rico
we got guys ya hate and warlords from chi-town
thatll spit off the dome or rip ya vocal chords right now
well put you in a trunk with spikes in a heat wave
think ya "crunk in a beat battle"
"illest came ta party" we even got "micz and a dj" haha
im tired a hearin hip hop is dead and illest is wack
this is a resurrection... cuz illest brought that shit back
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uppin some feed guys
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Post by LadySam »

how we even got a chick thatll rip ya from down under

obviously my fav line haha.
i liked this
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Post by drunken jesus »

not enough bars about me, peace
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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appreciate it uppin
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Post by B-Bear »

A very inconsistent structure

Didn't quite catch the flow, felt choppy.. but the content was very good, had some ill lines

If u could like get a hold of a proper structure, and a consistent flow, u could drop some very good verses.. that's really somethin that i'm missin.. u're pretty creative man, and have good multies.. anyway, keep it up
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appreciate it as always homie
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Post by Dead Silence »

i liked it and it did kinda chopp in the middle but the lines we sick good job.
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