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Tramatik ft. Complexity - 60 seconds to go

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word...time is ticking..
my mind is kicking into second gear
death is near, I think, I detect a tear
all my problems in retrospect are clear
my life flashes like a metorite
will God accept me in his light?
I believe in him like..
he exists, hell..Im pleading for life
I dont want to see him tonight
Im going to leave with a fight
my breathin is tight
I try to take the seal off the box
it works, but I cant break the locks
my fate is sealed
I hope heavens gates revealed
I doze off...


Tramatik

i awake to see fishes around me,im trapped in'a box
wrapped in locks with glass and a pretty cracked up clock
i look around and see sharks swimin,they're tastin blood
im thinkin 'DAMN IM FACIN WHAT?,meanwhile i see a key laced in mud
im diggin at the glass,kickin and screamin im frantic
this isnt happenin man im dreamin tryin not 2 panic
scannin the place im lookin and see three whales
jelly fish and sea shells,this has to be hell
water all around im seein no signs of escape
ill die here alone cuz man its my time and fate
above me electric eels are movin,tryna slither up high
but like plants with no sun,im surely gonna wither n die
confined to this fuckin box how the hell did i get here?
it doesnt matter anymore,no use in tryna shift gears
i feel the warmth of the water dyin down,im cryin now
cuz my world has been ended,i close my eyes n lie down
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Post by MesaR »

concept was pretty cool, ive never seen or even thought about it.

complexitys verse was pretty good looked abit rushed buy the length of his bars..
I think tramatik worked on his for abit longer. and really kicked on his verse..

not bad. pretty solid.


i look around and see sharks swimin,they're tastin blood
im thinkin 'DAMN IM FACIN WHAT?,meanwhile i see a key laced in mud

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Complexity i dont have a fav bar of yours.. they were to short and manily the same in skill lvl.. (pretty good) for this drop.. return the favor thanks.
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koolio..thanks n uppin
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Post by |.R.SON.aLL.| »

Wow ! ..
Tramatik Killed That Shit !!!!! ..
Hella Sick Drop Bro ..
This is Mos Deffo One Of ya More Better Drops ..
Multies & imagery Deffo an A-Factor in This Drop ..

Plex Had an Easy Flow ..
Multies in Tha First Few Bars Were Nicely Tied Together ..
Verse Was Short & Sweet ..
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.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

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