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Introducing the GODS of WAR

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GODS OF WAR aka Cee4, Rhino, Gutta, Tramatik and B Bear


quick freestyle


you know the crew its the Gods of War
when we look in the mirror we see some dogs thats raw
were liable to snap,our bites worse than our bark
lyrically equipped to blow you punks of the map
we some dope emcees, with the egos to match
when it comes to the battle watch us seize all the cats
im like the messiah, im the jesus of rap
when shit gets heated i know B`s got my back
him and Tramatik be paintin them lyrical pictures
we`re the new gods thats why we`re tearin up scriptures
Guttas sick with the multis plus this fools still at school
fuck Prophet n Sequence this pitbulls gonna rule
mess with Rhino and get battered just for speakin
he dont need a reason to leave brains splattered on the ceiling
when it comes to Cee4, lookie bitch here
you know damn well u aint seen a better rookie this year





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Post by Gutta »

fuk ya we shuld get a collabo with tha crew sometime
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Post by complexity »

haha ^

Nice little flow. I liked the multis.

"when it comes to the battle watch us seize all the cats
im like the messiah, im the jesus of rap"

Nothing to impressive, but a solid drop.
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Post by Cee4 »

thanks for the feed. yeah it was a lil somethin of the top. i think this is my first ever drop in the scriptures
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Post by RH1NO »

dope verse homie liked the multis n scheme

thats how ya rep a crew

collab coming soon!
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

liked the bar plex quoted above..it was nice tho man,good lil key,flow wasnt bad and i liked ur view points of everywhere.cool shit
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Post by Kurse »

Yeaaaaaa...Cee4 sick wit that wordplay bruh!

Gotta agree wit Plex and Tram...that Messiah line was classic.
But I also like how you incorperate all of ur crew members and say who is what.
Such as who's sick wit multies...
and the Rh1no "leaving brains splattered on the ceiling" line was dope too.

I look forward to seeing what this crew can do together.
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Post by SlickMex »

That was a nice verse..
GODS Of WAR sounds like a nice crew..
Best line was the quoted one..
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Post by Prophet »

Good shit Cee, had a nice rhymescheme in your verse. You had some aight multies.
Very easy to read, and it flowed nicely. Overall this was a good verse, I'll give it a 7/10
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Post by B-Bear »

Reppin Gods of WAR to the fullest!


your verse was good, liked it.. it wasn't spectactular, but it was good.. and i agree with what mr. rocky said about the incorporation of us.. good idea.. nice wordplay and multies, on a general, a solid drop!
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