Just another complexity verse - fuck friends

[complexity]

Thanks Rocky


i spit enough rhymes to myself behind the blinds//
about our tough times that i find myself confined//
combined with the fact, that every line you jacked//
makes its harder to unwind it back, the blindest act//
the further that i track, into our black past//
its just a vast trap, if you cant rhyme why rap?//
thats like being strapped, with a nine packed//
a shined gat, but in combat wont shoot at a cat//
my roof is flat, there is a place for us to chat//
like we use to back, when we were both wack//
remember smoking packs, behind them shacks//
or the volume maxed, in my bedroom relaxed//
getting high n eating snacks,how times elapsed//
four years exact, why cant you react//
i remember being apt to scrap when we lacked//
the cash, we wouldn't throw scraps in the trash//
or taking naps, consuming more water then polar caps//
we always kept our secrets under wraps//
having a bash, breaking glass, escaping class//
getting smashed, or when we got gashed//
by a knife slashed, but in 5 seconds laughed//
without strife, riding our bikes, what a life//
take something of price and began igniting it twice//
and we were so nice, especially when enticed//
bitching at the wise, when they were giving advice//
we were cool guys, though dense like school flies//
so no matter who dies, promise not to cry//
cuz if we fall out like this, be honest with ur eyes//
i never knew you were diguised, behind many lies//
actually was advised by some friends of mine at the time//
to demise from the crimes, and just say good bye//
but you improvised, in ur prime that was ur design//
u can't decline it, u treated friends like assigments//
had us down to a science, truth is the alliance//
was a defiance, and i loved you down to this silence//

i never knew
what happened to you
all the shit we been thru
its all taboo
which is true
from my view
n as we grew apart
it broke my heart
cuz you were a part
from the very start

[complexity]

Uppin

[complexity]

Maybe feedback

[Conspiracy]

Your welcome ;] nice job though mr.ian the comedian

[Subsist]

I liked the first 13 bars after that i just got lost.

[Ambiguous Realm]

some parts could've used some skill elevation.. overall i liked the topic and my feelings about shit can relate..8/10