Lyricism - Evil Geniuses At It Again

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Plex: Red
Ekoms: Orange

a lyricist is someone who comprehends his subject
this doesn't mean he sets the trends in public
he just expects his friends to love it
thats why his song transcends a club hit
you can spend a budget get the best production
beyond the beats the rest is nothing
a lyricist takes the game and resets the button
he leaves it to the best to judge him

lyrically, dedication is necessary,
aside from seperatin the message fairly,
the rest is clear se'A', mixin the fresh in rarely,
like an estuary, fans needed for elevatin the best to carry,
deliver n get paid, some too nervous..shiver n spit nades,
droppin bombs on stage quicker than shit made from liquor n lit shades,
if i could i'd reconfigure the hits played, but unfortunately the people will speak,
lyrics revealed skills weak, nowadays to be famous u just need a ill beat,
urban wannabes pretend they still street by actin like thugs strapped,
southern rappers with no flow, while the midwest is lackin the club tracks,
kids shot up for paintin their caps n their snubs black, new era havin ya shoved back,
evil geniuses ain't rappin to cut slack, we spittin the truth, bunch of bars written to prove,
don't ya'll listen to news? bout homeless children diein n livin in booths,
most of them starvin n killin for food, u gotta be kiddin me dude,
media so worried bout 50 n Ye, while the Army ships me away n tries to get me to stay,
my life's shitty n grey, watchin this war bury our soldiers beneath earth,
i mean.. we use to hear it on the radio ..over the speaker, troops getting older n weaker,
couldn't walk in their steps if u ripped out the soles of ur sneakers, this battle's gettin closer to feet first,
and in each verse spittin from rappers, is ignorant n forgettin the factors
bars could be bitten n shattered, hidden n gathered, but honestly it'd probably sound better if u had written them backwards, cuz as far as music goes.. mainstream is the most listened disaster,
n to these parents allowing this.. look at wat ur feedin ur babies,
exhausted men... they stay breathin war daily, so this is where we stand.. trading our freedom for safety

RAP'S A DISTRACTION...LEADIN TO SLAY ME

You can never accuse me of falsely using a track
faults thru me they suit me in black
I could truthfully snap
its funny they act like they all knew me
I love you all truly
but I am a lyricist and we fall usually
into the abyss our legacy dismissed
we exist for a short time this list is
a short rhyme, its sick, for the first time
I sit to realize the earths mine
then I'm hit with reality,it's scientific
the fallacy is hidden like hieroglyphics
I set the standard, no matter how high I lift it
I will die with this shit
placed on my shoulders like I hold a holster
I'm trapped on this rollercoaster till it throws me over

[-TraMaTiK-]

plex ur opening few bars really set this off that was hot..

ekoms i felt this bar alot prime example of someone like MIMS or JIBBS (as in what u were explainin)

if i could i'd reconfigure the hits played, but unfortunately the people will speak,
lyrics revealed skills weak, nowadays to be famous u just need a ill beat,

nice..^

i mean.. we use to hear it on the radio ..over the speaker, troops getting older n weaker,
couldn't walk in their steps if u ripped out the soles of ur sneakers, this battle's gettin closer to feet first,
and in each verse spittin from rappers, is ignorant n forgettin the factors
bars could be bitten n shattered, hidden n gathered, but honestly it'd probably sound better if u had written them backwards, cuz as far as music goes.. mainstream is the most listened disaster,

woahh..^..mad fuckin nice..everything b4 that lead up 2 that..madd nice flow and multis..

and plex ur last bit was great..loved how u made it clear were only here a short time n shit.good shit..

but i only took out the bars(besides mentioning some)that i felt were madd nice..the rest is really nice too,just these really stood out..wish plex wudda done more..but its cool u both dida good job..ekoms and plex both killin the multis and the mesage is nice..liked this alot

[Ambiguous Realm]

thx man, i think tom told me he had alot more.. but maybe i misread or somethin lol

[Ambiguous Realm]

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