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Turning a Blind Eye

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Ok 1st Of All Reading Cee4's Drop inspired Me To Write This, His Drop Just Sent The Feelings i Felt, And The Memories Flooding Back, So i Was Really into This. Not My Best, Not My Worst, Enjoy.

Street Ain't About Ebonics, Or Rapping About-Guns ..||
We Were Trying To Survive And Find a Way Out The Town's-Slums ..||
it Ain't Make u a 'Pussy' if u Know When To Shout-'Run!' ..||
u Ain't Less Of a Thug, if You've Been Beat To The Ground-Once ..||
Do u Know What it's Like Always Watching-ur-Back? ..||
Observing EVERY Street Before u Start Walking-ur-Path ..||
They Could Be Popping-Some-Caps, They're Crazy-Enough ..||
Born in a Battleground Where Every Fuckin Baby-is-Tough ..||
We Don't Brag About The Shit To Save Our Online-Rep ..||
And i Ain't Trying To impress These Stupid 'Online-Sets' ..||
We Never Spoke With Words, it Was More 'Who Fights-Best?' ..||
Like it's All We Ever Talk About... it IS! it's a Fight-Fest ..||
Our Way Of Life, Our 'Sport' The Adrenaline-Rushing ..||
Fight To The Death? Sure.. Stab Him Till His Tendons-Are-Gushing ..||
Noone Cares About ur Pride, Only Theirs, it's About-Respect ..||
Every Boy For His Fuckin Self, Randoms Come And Clout-ur-Head ..||
Wanting To Be Like The 'Big Dogs', Wanting Some Kind-Of-Rep ..||
a Lot Didn't Give a Fuck, But Some Were Scared To Fight-The-Best ..||
When ur 8, it Doesn't Matter How Much Beatings-u-Take ..||
u Don't Give a Shit, Fuck Slander Man ur Seeking-ur-Fate ..||
You'll Fight On And Fight, i Used To Hit Anyone ..||
Cuz i Knew i Could've, And Yeah Then it Was Very-Fun ..||
'Who's The Hardest?' Was The Question Asked Most-in-This-Place ..||
And u Were Willing To Kill, And Leave Some Guys With a Broken-Face ..||
i Moved To My New School, And i Punched My Way-To-Love ..||
Anyone Crossed Me, im Like 'Fuck u Bitch, Face-The-Mud!' ..||
After 2 Years Of 'Being-The-Hardest', i Was The Dearly-Departed ..||
'Hit Anyone Again, ur OUT!' First Time i Feared-What-i-Started ..||
Now People Weren't-Scared, The News Was Everywhere ..||
So i Kept it Outta School, Beat Em in The Streets... Or Anywhere ..||
Just Not School, And i Was Too Young To Roam The City-For-Them ..||
My Fighting Days Were Over... For Now, Welcoming The Shitty-Boredom ..||
Let Guys Hit Me, But if i Hit Back i Was Sent-Packing ..||
But i Still Had My Crew, i Let All My Friends-Back-Me ..||
Our Year at School Was Divided into Two Classes ..||
it Was Us Against Them Since i Moved There, But Their Class Had The Masses ..||
i Could Take-Them-All, Great-And-Small, But it Was Over-For-Me ..||
And i Was Starting To Realise 'So What Man ur Older-Than-Three' ..||
High School Started, Now We Were All Joining-The-Gangs ..||
For a While im Like 'Should i Let Free This Boy-And-His-Hands?' ..||
Fuck it, But Highschool is Big, And i Wasn't The Don-Now ..||
But i Was One Of The Heavyweights, My Sun Was Starting To Dawn-Now ..||
Walkin With a Chip On My Shoulder, Hat-On, And a Baton ..||
And Now im Dressing Like The Fucking Dudes i Used To Rag-On ..||
But Back Then i Was Starting To Feel Fear, And i Couldn't Take-it ..||
Too Much News Here, Too Many Thugs, Vandals And Rapists ..||
Roll With The Gang, Don't Get Hurt You'd-Think ..||
Until a Bigger Crew Comes Ready To Knock u Toothless ..||
Fuck This Hangin About in The Streets, Fuck This Darkness-And-Pain ..||
u Only Live Once, And i Was Ready To Start-it-Again ..||
Times Changed, i Didn't Need This And i Wanted The 'Right-Life' ..||
One Day im Striking a High-Five, Next im Jumped By 'My-Guys' ..||
Now i Don't Wait For The Night-Lights, Or Wnna Hear Fright-Cries ..||
The Streets Are Calling Me Back, But im Turning a Blind-Eye ..||
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Alternative Bar, i Liked Both But Here it is.

High School Started, Now We Were All Joining-The-Gangs ..||
For a While im Like 'it's Time, Are u a Boy-Or-a-Man?' ..||
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

i kinda read thru the first half then skimmed the rest.. its probably one of ur better verses atleast the ones i've read
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EkomS wrote:i kinda read thru the first half then skimmed the rest.. its probably one of ur better verses atleast the ones i've read
Overall i Feel it's Pretty Solid, Although Reeeeeally Repetitive at Parts. That's Something i Need To Work On, Sharpening Up And Being Able To Get My Point Across Short And Sweet.
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Post by Ambiguous Realm »

yea, the transition of inner multies blended in pretty nice here n there
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Post by Cee4 »

Good drop Dom. I feel the topic. You had a good use of multis and it pretty much flowed well the whole way through. It was a bit long but it wasnt borin or anythin. There wasnt any bars that jumped out at me but the whole drop was solid.
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