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RH1NO
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got a fuckin problem i feel bad fa ya son
i got 99 probles but this bitch aint one
I got the faget foldin on the rap he stole again
Foes that couldn get pussy with some tag deodorant
critics that say he's "hazard ta raps explosiveness "
you ant from the hood, my tactic blows a leave ya act exposed ta them
battlin masses of chumps i attacked in a rumble
its a fact i can juggle, talkin bout scriptures but u a
swag jacker that mumbles,"rh1no" could sell out shows in a african jungle
dont get played like an atari the safari starts,
pushin more shots than a bacardi cart
need chest cushions cuz your soft at heart,
N ta the izz-O spittin like a shotty spark
im slappin bastards wit this rap ive mastered,
you ask a question i could rap the answer
turn around n see ya at my back with dancers,
sick blastin hazard like he got clap and cancer
you still shoppin at good-will
you couldnt stick what ya kickin ta me wit glue heels
google me.. now hows ya mood feel believe me dudes real
you couldnt hit me wit ya ruger if i stood still
smell what the rocks cookin, ya get caught lookin
im smart stupid wouldnt get locked up if the shots took him
half a mill ta stare at ya, "thinkin" ya ass is real cant carry ya
snatch ya will n bury ya we different levels can ya feel the barrier
im playin kill the carrier this bitch can beat me im darin ya
im bleedin malaria not carin son i blast you and ya man wit a derringer
let the scripture continue the dagger broke the skin n ima twist it in you
i grip a pen rude hope this shit offends you dont ever let my name leave ya lips again dude


WAS LISTENIN TA SOME JAY 2DAY
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seemed to have a decent flow to it, it could be alot better but considering it was a freestyle it was decent
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Post by complexity »

Good diss homie.
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Post by RH1NO »

appreciate the feed fellas uppin
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