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They Been Slackin

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lil piece i worked on and just wrapped it up really,not my best but its somethin

the ink stains the page and a new trend iz crackin
sendin men packin cuz they been slackin
not showin there heart thru some pen action
just continuin'ta laugh,they been actin
tryna see the light as they read n write
analyzing ur words till they bleed with fright
gods seed was right what u need tonight
iz some holy water'ta help heed the fight
and show everybody these cowards are the same
ill jump over misery and tower over pain
bringin and army ready justa play our game
shower ur brain with facts,and empower my veins
ta the point im numb any pain im not feelin it
open ya brain and any thought u had im stealin it
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Post by complexity »

"and show everybody these cowards are the same
ill jump over misery and tower over pain "


Nice little drop man, i don't have many reservations.
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