WHAT AM I DOIN

[RH1NO]

im quick blazing scriptures, hopin ta get
more laughs than a dicks baby picture
i spit maybe sicker, than a kid with rabies
bitten by his baby sister's babysitter
ill rip off your scabs from scabies mister,
arrange em on the floor, spin, n play twister
super man that ho! put on a cape n fist her,
wash my hands off and try to explain the blisters
stalk ya til your missin like hoffa,
im coughin up blood talk n rippin guys awful
beatin off my dick in a brothel,
causin wreckage in this bed and breakfast,
but who the fuck spit in my waffle
these are the results of my environment?
im buyin it if thats why im a tyrant
but ima keep droppin fire til i exercise retirement
effortless uncensored hits, think you can censor this
i take offense to this and i can sense your bitch
bend and twist you til your dense and shit.. dont mention it
expect the kid ta land punches til your dentures split
i could stay milkin these bars like a (pipe) wrench ta tits
for those embarkin to hate on R im made ta scar
EM put his dick in a tip cup i raped the jar im rated r
blazin gars n makin sextapes with some matrix stars
i wasnt made with flaws im servicin lips and breakin jaws
ive just gotta pray im bold, when the time comes
sure the nights young but the days are old
might find a grave from the yay i sold
the game i play is cold like when i play i fold
the fate i hold is maybe the same story as those
my grey and gold trey 8 has told
but i run from nothin, wonderin why
my mind reacts 1 way but its my balls im trustin
hustlin calls from dawn ta dusk and
if i have ta make that call im bustin
i have to im protectin a life,
expect ta fight n get sliced precisely ive perfected the knife
inspected the rifle twice and ready tonight
if the situation calls for.. im takin a life
its a sad story better yet a mag story
no head line pushin the chevy ta redline
not od'in on xanex but im killin bars like a dead line

[RH1NO]

uppin a little feed

[B-Bear]

U started off really good, but i kinda fell off a lil later.. flow was a bit choppy someplaces, made it hard to follow.. it's a freestyle right? so, i won't be too harsh.. anywaaaay, u're fucked up kid.. haha.. write some crazy ass lines..

"i spit maybe sicker, than a kid with rabies
bitten by his baby sister's babysitter
ill rip off your scabs from scabies mister,
arrange em on the floor, spin, n play twister"

Hahahaha^^

Ur structure is gettin better tho.. but i'd like to see u write a topical, instead of showin how fuckin crazy u are.. lol.. anyway, keep it up man! i like it..

[RH1NO]

lol
appreciate the feed homie

yeah was a free cant get away from the crazyness

im workin on a topical itll be down soon

uppin some feed

[-TraMaTiK-]

pretty nice shit 4 a free,cant really argue it..whole thing was nice,few lines here n there made me laugh a bit but u did ur thing homie,this was cool,definetly seen better but 4 a free it was good,props

[complexity]

The drop was straight up a freestyle, which I like a lot.

"im buyin it if thats why im a tyrant
but ima keep droppin fire til i exercise retirement
effortless uncensored hits, think you can censor this
i take offense to this and i can sense your bitch"

Dope on the multis.

Though, I have a little story for you.

I remember when a guy was watching me shoot around before and saw I was screwing around.

Throwing up really difficult shots, etc.

So he came up to me and said that I should always shoot balanced no matter what.

That way, I don't get into bad habits and it's always good practice.

He said when you're taking them crazy shots and messing around, you should stay balanced.

Basically meaning shoot calculated at all times.

Something to ponder..

[RH1NO]

^^i know what youre gettin at

thanx for the feed everybody

[Haz]

Rhino Let These People Hear Ya Track Dissing Me.. And Afta They Get All Hyped Up Thinkin u "Ripped" Me lol
ima Put My Track On Here.. Lets Get it Dough

[RH1NO]

THIS DROP AINT ABOUT YOU YOU SOFT WANNABEME BITCH

[Cee4]

ha ha this pretty dope. your a crazy muthafucka. if you really did that off the top then you have a lot of talent plus you must be on a shit load of drugs or somethin lol. anyway this was entertaining and funny. id rather read verses like this than someones struggle with life

[RH1NO]

^^ thanks fa leavin feed fam

yeah this was off the top it was originally 2 freestyles i did but thought they kinda flowed 2gether

so i posted them together

p.s.

im high on life lol