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i feel in ur pool of lies and got soaked with pain
beauty was ur disguise as i choked in the rain
provoked by the same,ppl who evoked im insane
yet they dont see there all cloaked in the shame
but someone always in debate testin me
so it seems kinda like a late blessin see
the way my mind and fate keep pressin me
against the wall,ta have date with destiny
but this pen and pad iz really all i have
all u laugh when i happen'ta call it that
'book of life', and by me its sittin
just waitin for somethin else ta be written
im paintin pictures of who this ghost is
look in the mirror i see the closeness
a message, that just assembles in time
showin my future with a tremble in my spine
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Post by RH1NO »

im paintin pictures of who this ghost is
look in the mirror i see the closeness
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nice little drop homie

flowed nicely felt like some emotion behind this one.. hmm

dont know the hidden message but i havent slept in 3 days either lol

neway good shit homie
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

thanks 4 the feed so far
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im paintin pictures of who this ghost is
look in the mirror i see the closeness
a message, that just assembles in time
showin my future with a tremble in my spine

I Wus Feelin This Piece By U.. ^^ My Fav Part.
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