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Brah-Vo
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Time ta be SCARED!!!!

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Muthafucka they call me`the`wraith
you tryna fight back? ya cant even see`my`face
i see you scared, dem goosbumps poppin`on your`skin
you scream in terror as i start choppin`off your`limbs
see in the night` i go`crazy just like`a`vampire
my`sight`goes`hazy, need a torch so i set the head`on`the pike*`afire
you go crazy at the thought of death, get ready sucka, the door`just`opened
imma rock your world, just like the tsunami that roared`through` new`orleans
you know that i`pack`heat stackin`body`bags in my freeza
im conquerin `rap`feats, poppin`tags, hot like strip teasas
ill slap ya like a dad chastizin his son
dont even bother firing, i circumcised your gun
my mind like a twisted magic`show, poof you're`gone
just like a lethargic hoe, ill scare u shitless you wont be bothered to run
they call me slim the nightmare`i keep it in`check
everytime i walk past i make the hairs`stand on the back of ya`neck
i can see right through you, i read ya like a book
i have a friend who wants to MEAT you, his name is rusty hook


*(pike was a long spear used in medieval times that they used to display the heads of people who were beheaded)

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My attempt at a bitta horrorcore. tell me what ya think.
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Post by RH1NO »

lol you got potential kid this was pretty basic

didnt flow too good but it was ok for your first try at horrorcore

remember dude shit should be nasty and gruesome

keep droppin
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Post by Brah-Vo »

thanks for the feeds boyz.

uppin fo more
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