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-TraMaTiK-
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

this was short obviously..but it flowed good..favorite part wud be this bar

i'll Switch Tha Keyz And Clip Ya Knees Just To Give Ya Hips A Tease
Drop A Hydrogen Bomb So You Aint Got Shit Ta Breathe

cool shit^..liked it..if u plan on doin a part 3 definetly make it longer but overall 4 a short piece this was cool
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Post by RH1NO »

i liked this still on point with the flow the first one was better

like ta see what you can do with a longer version

nice lil drop homie
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Post by B-Bear »

Nice lil drop, flowed good for a freestyle.. multies were on point.. can sense like a sorta new york style in your writing.. lol.. anyway, it's all good man... i liked it
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