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Since You So On Nas Ima Etha U Out, Thinking You Gods Son When Ya Man SKEETS IN YA MOUTH
Jesis Juice..H.G. Back He iz Loose Like One Ov Yall Cut My Rope Afta Dey Squeezed My Noose/
Store My Enemies In a Latched Up Prism Sealed By Magnitism Bodys Smoked Like a Bag Ov Ism..
Ya Reign Wus Momentary Ya Raps Unda a Stone So Buried Its Next To Tha Coooking Core/
U Wuz Nevah Hot Guess U Found What U Was Lookin For, Stuck On Nas Dic Thinking Prognastic..
Prophecy?! More Like The Great Fall, On Ya Site U's Tha Great Wall Suckin So Much Dick Prolly Ate Ballz/
Tha Last Girl Plex Talked To Was EIGHT YALL..I C U Lil Pussyz Like Diz Perv Ima Rape All..
Your Lying With a Ape Call.. Beatin Ya Chest i'll Be Beatin ya Chest Wen Im Heatin Tha Tec /
Like Stretching Leave Ya Feet By Ya Neck, U Tour The Trops My Hand Tourz Da Glock..
For Sure Its Cock'd Pour'd It Hot Tore Ya Top Den Strip'd U Down And Store Ya Gwop../
Next Day Enta Da Store And Cop Everything On Da Floor I Spot..Whoeva On Tha Scene Can Face Tha Beam
Squeeze it Till Dey Face Iz Steamed..His Caskit Corpseliss Torchd it No Remorse With His Tors-Strip/
In Da Port Quick..Floatin Past Ya Toes And Back Ina Floatin Raft Buggin Like i Wus Smoking Crack
How Opens Dat , Choking Rats Who've Spoken Facts Snitchin Dey Provoking Cats To Smoke They Ass/
Like a Upgraded Version Of Coke in Glass Around ya Nec Tie a Rope So Fast Till U Turn Green Like U Wus
Soaked In Grass, Angry U Have a Disability Cus U Dont Have Dis - Ability .. Contained In i/
You Wont Win Guy Blow U Away Like Leafs Wen Wind Flyz Spit Dat Heat Till Ya Skin Frys
So Many Words I Ate Sick Verses Thrown Up Like I Regurgatate...Vocab-ulary..Son U Like Ya Dad is Buried/
Faggit Fairy in Dis Battle U Wont Weigh Out Right Like a Skimpy Deala Bagging Mary../
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pretty dope man. i dont know why you get so much criticism
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Cee4 wrote:pretty dope man. i dont know why you get so much criticism
He never really got that much.

Mainly just on the front of making sense, not that he can't make a punchline or come up with some creative lines.

People just hate his personality that's a completely different story.
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Thankz C-4 lol Now hes Sayin its My Personality..
I Dunno Why i Get So Much Critism lol its Wudeva
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Your personality is why people care to tell you how bad you suck or
why you do suck 80 percent of the time.
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lol it Eatz U Alive To Know im Bettah Den U..
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