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MesaR
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domino diss YOUR A FAGGOT.

Post by MesaR »

domino you are a faggot.

spitting punches-ya-bluffing, speaking-weak.. i feel bad beating-rookies ..!!
just go back to munching-on-muffins drinking-tea and eating-cookies .. !!!
I spit a ghastly-flow, combined with my punchlines you anit ' ducking-shit '
forget this beef, your like a ' nasty-hoe ' you just anit worth 'fuckin-with '
finish-with-rapping, know one reads ur text or buys your ' tapes-two '
hes british-with-acne, thats living proof that god acutally ' hates-you '
the ' rugars's-preferred ' with a shot of that you'll get a ' loss-of-thought '
only way you will win gold is being a computer-nerd if that was-a-sport!
im just being honest, you suck writing-lines, and your whack-at-bars..
lyrics? you'll be biting-mine, for the next kid you diss with acne-scars!!!

k it was only a quick 5 bars, to see if he will reply, and your a faggot.

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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Post by Haz »

Uh.. Where To Strt.. it Seems like u Sorta Took Rell N Dominos Style And Mixed Um Into Dis One Verse..
It Wusnt Really Dat Hard i've Seen U Spit Bettah Shit..
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Post by Momeijah »

u Didn't Even Diss Me at All in That, Some Nice Multis Though.

ill Write Something Up Later.
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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Post by B-Bear »

Some decent punches, but it lacked a better build-up.. it's like u diss him two times in every bar.. i would've stuck to build up one heavyweighter instead of two lightweighters, u get my point?
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Post by Cee4 »

not a great diss but it was still a decent verse. sayin someones British is not a diss- especially from an Australian lol. check your national flag. think thats a Union Jack on it. We own u lol
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