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A bit of free style

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First attempt LOL.

bitch listen here lemme make on thing clear
ya by ol' slim is a asian you should fear
hey yo listen to that son
once i be cockin me gun there wont be anywhere to run son
leave u runnin with ya dick between ya legs
hang you up with pegs, drinking beer by the keg
only 14 already doing an underage binge
flip you up like a door with a fucked up hinge
blast you so much the hair on ya head be singed


diggg it.
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Post by complexity »

Stick to writing, i can freestyle better off the word yellow
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harsh but true.
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Post by Haz »

Wow..U Typed it LoL it Wusnt Freestylin! Itz Keystylin..
Deres a Difference..
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Post by B-Bear »

Agree with Complex, stick to your writtens for now.. keystylin would come naturally later on when u learn how to put together words and sentences in the right way.. So keep droppin..
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