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pour water n pass you some wine more veteran crime bitch im a general
envy me flashin green at ya diamonds and turn them shits into emeralds
i grew up on the grind while you partied, thug? you couldnt face all that
only time i stepped in n got outta line at a dance club was with baseball bats
police tryin ta trace calls back cuz i left ya mood blue and ya face all black
tryin ta find clues and reason why i fuckin tossed n robbed that fake
and why i got the balls to "fire the mossberg" off like its job's at stake
you cant see me like im drippin in camo a god winnin is imminent fammo
give me a spliff and a camel n ill keep playin your game kid i got infinite ammo
youre NO.2 you just write with lead but aint prepared ta to give someone real a test
full clips can you feel it yet, my D.E. never runs dry thats why your ceilins wet
"attemptin ta murder" vets in some filler threads just means you aint no killer yet
you couldnt give a pillow threats how you loadin up guns son you couldnt even fill a vest
u want beef man ill just defeat you easily with wit n some free hand see fam
n if need be when i conceive plans ill hit ya with more shells than ya see in beach sand
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Post by Haz »

Honestly U Mighta Been Bored.. But U Could At Least Made a Effort lol.. This iz Pretty Dumb Man
it Wus Aiight in a Few Parts...

you cant see me like im drippin in camo a god winnin is imminent fammo
give me a spliff and a camel n ill keep playin your game kid i got infinite ammo
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

this was aight dude..yea u cudda came harder but it wuz str8,honestly no lines grabbed my eye but this was a solid peace overall like the flow i admit..anywayz ill check ur other drop soon but this wasnt bad
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