Multis & Punchlines 5 Bars.

[MesaR]

aren't any go~away~matters, grabbing peoples limbs~and~teeth
now i throw~away~wRAPPERS quicker then young kids-with -sweets!
a range~of~strength will dismantle~pros and weak~songs!
rearrange~your~face, put~your~nose were your cheek~was!
sweeping~up~winds[wins] that would~easily provoke~a~breeze!
eating~your-~limbs but nothings coming out like choked~emcees!
snap your throat~in~threes, not talking, like a cat got-your-tounge!
spitting 5 bars to prove my point, when i could of stopped~at~one!
ayo fuck these lame~scandles, about flow is all im spitting-with!
now i walk over emseas, in the same~sandles jesus was~fitted-in!..

... upping feed ...

[MesaR]

Thanks JJ

uppin

[Cee4]

this was decent. a typical verse from you. nothin special but still a solid verse, good structure with multis. i think you should work more on punchlines or somethin that grabs the readers attention.