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okay basic rhymes, punches were straight overall some dope ones init though.

Fuck ya Whack Raps i Pack Gats Ta Clap Cats
Watch How I'll Putta "Clip In Ya Head" Like A Flash Back (DP)

probley the best bar in the whole peace ..

i'll Take Ta Foldin Cats While Rollin Craps
Call Me Tha New Era Cuz i Keep Throwin Caps

J.J u could have hit abit harder, looked abit rushed..

i'll Take Ta Foldin Cats While Rollin Craps
Call Me Tha New Era Cuz i Keep Throwin Caps

^ coo

overall this was abit basic, played topic, and alrighty punches, good shit
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LOOL He Just Spit Harder Punches in That Cypher
Than I've Seen From U Durin Ur Lil illest Careeer LOL!
Jj
I Liked How u Kept Switchin Ya Style Up
Punches n Multies..LoL Dat 50cent Shit Wuz a Strait Line 2
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Re: Hip-Hop Phenoms Ft. Da Professa

Post by B-Bear »

ThatGuyYouHate wrote: i'ma Lil Slow...
Glad we cleared that up.. lol.. just kiddin man.. do we still need the link?

Anyway, the drop!

"It's good for being a keystyle, like the wordplay - some clever bars..


"Fuck ya Whack Raps i Pack Gats Ta Clap Cats
Watch How I'll Putta "Clip In Ya Head" Like A Flash Back (DP)"

Strongest bar, together with these, which I thought stood out..


"i'll Murda Some Frauds While My Techs Emergin
Rip Ya Heart Out And Still Be A Respected Surgeon (TGYH) "

"i'll Take Ta Foldin Cats While Rollin Craps
Call Me Tha New Era Cuz i Keep Throwin Caps (TGYH)"

"Mayn this dog is scared like Scooby do when da Uzi shoots
ima leave this "Square Twisted" like a rubix cube wit a whole da size of a Hoola hoop (DP)"

In general, I liked it... like to see more of them collabs... keep doin your thang!
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-.HaZarD.- wrote:LOOL He Just Spit Harder Punches in That Cypher
Than I've Seen From U Durin Ur Lil illest Careeer LOL!
lol if that was to me
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