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Politically Incorrect #2

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We are all victims to the oldest business known to man
without wisdom to know the difference; religion controls the land
not my soul, hold my hand as we take a journey, through all the lies
2000 years of deception; the sacrifice; afterlife; and modernized perception
of the brilliant resurrection of Jesus Christ; a man of perfection
who died for your sins, I disagree with that perspective
if the bible is your evidence, you better check it
cuz Jesus Christ never died, he resurrected and left this earth alive
so why the hell are you getting your penis circumcised
even his births a lie, Mary wasn't a virgin, historically speaking
she was having sex with Roman Soldiers on an ordinary weekend
more the merrier as the saying goes, so before you pray below the steeple
remember that Mary got down on her knees, only for the roman people
you're bound to agree, a person like that sounds like a fuckin bimbo
who better duck cuz pre-Christian Jews are all stuck in limbo
enough info, i plan to relax tonight, pass up, on an animal sacrifice
and I'll move to North Korea, if I want a sample of after life

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Post by LadySam »

this was ok, obviously not your best. but you did get your message across i guess. it flowed well in some parts and not so well in others. cant wait to see #3
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Post by Brah-Vo »

i liked politically incorrect #1 better.

i dont necessarily agree with what you're saying but hey its a mad drop.
The flow was on and off but u really got ur message across.

cuz Jesus Christ never died, he resurrected and left this earth alive
so why the hell are you getting your penis circumcised

^^^^ liked that bar alot.

nice work plex but ive seen you drop better then this.
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Post by complexity »

What don't you agree with?

Just so I know. Everyone has a right to their opinion.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

pretty much the whole piece. lol.

I do believe in the death and resurrection of Jesus Chris and that he was God's son who came down to Earth in human form. Now, i may not be the most perfect christian but i certainly do believe that he exists.
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Apparently, I have finally reached politically incorrect status. Woot

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Post by Cee4 »

i actually liked this better than the first one. flow/multis on point as standard. i liked this one better cause you put a bit of humour in it. dont know if you meant it to be funny but it had me laughin

cuz Jesus Christ never died, he resurrected and left this earth alive
so why the hell are you getting your penis circumcised
even his births a lie, Mary wasn't a virgin, historically speaking
she was having sex with Roman Soldiers on an ordinary weekend
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