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Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Mon Oct 29, 2007 12:35 pm

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kill my blood,and ill come back wit a ressurection//
spill my bud,and ill make the death toll go up faster than erections//
im back for the first time and im bringin tha truest shit//
exploding from this deceased life choked up wit the bluest shit//
have me turn to completely nothing//
come back wit them mosh-birds pumpin//
freedom of speech,well listen to this//
fuck that nigga screech,stopp the diss//
give it back at the real kids that are pissed//
sum matrix shit shot at and all of the bullets missed//
the only hood u in is the one stitched on ur shirt//
come to my side and see who snitched and was murked//
im back from the dead to hunt all of u wit this line//
no real shit on ya head coz im back for the first time//

yeah im tryin to do sumtin that was a freestyle so it may be ruff but leave me sum feed back please

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Mon Oct 29, 2007 6:56 pm

"come back wit them mosh-birds pumpin//
freedom of speech,well listen to this// "

My god. I'm going to cry. I really need to get drunken jesus's phone #. I would wake him up for this one.

Subsist · Post by **Subsist** » Mon Oct 29, 2007 8:52 pm

lol @ complexity.

The first bar had the second line alot longer than the first and it blew the flow and that was a bad piece starter.

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Tue Oct 30, 2007 6:13 am

this is probably the best drop in the scriptures i`ve ever seen

this bar amazed me

freedom of speech,well listen to this//
fuck that nigga screech,stopp the diss//

illest saviour has returned........

Gutta · Post by **Gutta** » Tue Oct 30, 2007 12:28 pm

u suck dick

RH1NO · Post by **RH1NO** » Tue Oct 30, 2007 1:06 pm

KILL YOURSELF

-TraMaTiK- · Post by **-TraMaTiK-** » Tue Oct 30, 2007 2:20 pm

how bout 'back for the last time'

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Wed Oct 31, 2007 2:33 am

I give you and A for.... Suckin at Life

Brah-Vo · Post by **Brah-Vo** » Wed Oct 31, 2007 7:35 pm

lol. dead silence. work on ya vocab and include more multis. dont be so cheesy and elementary too. dont worry bro. neva give up .

but seriously LMFAOROFLOLOL at ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ everyone.

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Sat Nov 03, 2007 9:27 am

yeah i no but thanx for the feed i guess im just tryin sumin tho ya no

so tha freedom of speech bar was good or are u guys being sarcastic?

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Sat Nov 03, 2007 6:12 pm

Are you all to dumb - to not make fun of him over this line "have me turn to completely nothing//
come back wit them mosh-birds pumpin// "?

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