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some one words in this drop was used in the papoose one .. but what word wasnt

every month im planing to keep going from were i left off so next month it will be E.F.G.H
everytime it will be four bars


aggressive artist's abominate army's aiming ak's and Artilery's
Americans assume an angry aussie aquries astonishing ability's
born bombing bars, busting brothers. bullets burying bitches
big bricks braking' boasting bout bloody bagdads busted bridges
caution crazy cunts cracking coward cats capping Chicago crips
cute children, crunching certain competion carrying countless clips
divide dedication, dope deveastatin drops define~death..
dmx 's diaster drops..do diligent dummy dudes die~deaf?...
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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not bad some parts made more sence than others, divide dedication??? what does that mean and why would you wanna devide your dedication?
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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i think he means to spread dedication
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yeah that makes sense
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Post by complexity »

Pretty good. Better than I could do with the alliterations.

"caution crazy cunts cracking coward cats capping Chicago crips
cute children, crunching certain competion carrying countless clips "
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