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Haz
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Your Done Pt.1

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Yo.. You Was Shut Fa a Minute Ina Hut Till u Finish'd Slicin ya Wrists Off, Usin Ya Own Blood As Lip Gloss
Keep Ya Mouth On Ekoms Dick Trick Enough Herpe Damage We'll See if This Pricks Lip Stick/
Green n Rotted u Can Tell This "Fiend Gets Rodded" Up the ass Ur illests Uppa Class?! FUCK YA ASS
I Aint Bowin To Some1 Who Dont Deserve a Crown Plus Like a Caterer Atta Party I Dun Served Dis Clown/
His Styles Like a Fucked Up Car Ona Bridge it'll Swerve Den Drown To Sex Infants Dis Perve is Down..
My City Not To Long Ago Wus MURDA CAP, Maine Got HOODS?! I Aynt Ever Ever Ever HURDA DAT/
Im Suburbin Haha Dats B.S. Mayne Bridgeports Responsible For Fat joe Not Having His T.S. CHAIN
I Fuc Wit Tha Port n Wack Where Youngins Dont Report in Class They Teachin Lessonz Torchin Strapz/
Your From Maine The Home of The Rain Bow Flag U Havent Lef ya Home How ya Stain - Blow - Fag?
Im So Sick Of ya FAKE HOE SHIT, How u STATE U BLOW CLIPS While in ya STATE U BLOW DICK/
The Joke is Up Like a COMEDY FLYER Tha Truth is Your Fake Honestly Liar You Promised Me Fire
I Waited For Somethin I Actually Could Compete With, But Like a Loose Cooch its Eazi To Beat it... /
Ya Wrists You Be SLITTIN Cusa Groupa Peoples Lyk a Nuns Pussy .. YOU JUST CANT "FIT-IN"
Like a Seam "ONLINE U IS STITCH'D IN" Lyk a Forged Document Everythinz False in ya WRITTINZ/
Complexity?!?! You've Bin- Classified-as-Simple..U Net Datin Leak'd Out Lyk the Inside Of a PIMPLE
Now Your Embarrassed, Ya Life U Shuld CHERISH Lyk Paris Wit a H At Da End You Will PARISH/
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Post by Brah-Vo »

i take it this is another diss to plex.

and his answer to this is hazard is nothing.

This was def betetr then your intro but shit man.
Good effort and all but plex took this..shall we call it round? by a mile.
If u analyze both pieces like bar for bar plex just takes it. you had some good lines like

Yo.. You Was Shut Fa a Minute Ina Hut Till u Finish'd Slicin ya Wrists Off, Usin Ya Own Blood As Lip Gloss
Keep Ya Mouth On Ekoms Dick Trick Enough Herpe Damage We'll See if This Pricks Lip Stick/
Green n Rotted u Can Tell This "Fiend Gets Rodded" Up the ass Ur illests Uppa Class?! FUCK YA ASS
I Aint Bowin To Some1 Who Dont Deserve a Crown Plus Like a Caterer Atta Party I Dun Served Dis Clown/

liked ya first two bars. But yeh plex took this "round"
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