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Post by complexity »

"i Pitch Rockets Of Doom An Hold Pockets That Boom
i'm Sonnin You Rookiez Like You Rockin Tha Loom
i Gotta Army There's No Need Ta Pull A Gun
Do Like Rambo i'll Just Duck Roll And Run
Break You Like A Dutchie And Open Ya Vest
Let Loose With A Tech And Start Smokin Ya Chest "

Dope bars homie. Though clearly not the best ones you have spit.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Lol dun think links are needed nowadays. But yo man i was feelin this piece alot.
They were straight punches and i liked em very much.
Never seen any of your other work so i cant really compare.

Favourite bars:

Have You Trippin Thinkin Bloodz Throwin Crip
Put A G On Ya Head So you Got A Rock ta Wear

Ya Momz Cooked Me Up 'Til You Was A Bubble in Tha Sock
Beat Her With Tha Pipe Cuz She Was A Fiend Havin Trouble Wit Tha Rock
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Post by Cee4 »

yeah this was pretty good. not your best but still a decent drop. nice multies, flow was good.

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i Gotta Army There's No Need Ta Pull A Gun
Do Like Rambo i'll Just Duck Roll And Run
Break You Like A Dutchie And Open Ya Vest
Let Loose With A Tech And Start Smokin Ya Chest
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Post by RH1NO »

pretty nice seen better from ya but still good

fav bars are those that C n Plex quoted also

keep em coming homie
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