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Dude this was fuckin dope man.

Ya multies was good, your wordplay, metas flow everything man. this was just such an awesome piece man.

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i Aint A Gangsta But You Can Call Me Scarface And Capone
When Tha Nine Cockz it'll Leave Ya Face Flippin Like A Camera Phone
Tha Nine Popz Like I-Hop Quit Trippin Or Tha Gat Will Sneeze
Let Loose With Tha Slugz And Serve Ya Fuckin Ribz Up Like Applebees
i Cant Believe These Kidz Still Lookin Foor Punches
i'll Serve "Barz Up" Like Prison Guards Cookin Tha Lunches

^^^ just look at that man. thats just fuckin sick. You can't say anymore. THis is one of the best peices ive read in scriptures.

awesome job bro. keep up.
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Raiza_shaRpe` wrote:Dude this was fuckin dope man.
^^^ just look at that man. thats just fuckin sick. You can't say anymore. THis is one of the best peices ive read in scriptures.

awesome job bro. keep up.
i wouldnt go that far dude.. but this still was a typical good thewunyouhate drop.

same topic as your others.. gets abit boring but you always keep it fresh witch is good.
multis were simple punches were alright too some dope ones in there ill quote a few ..
still see some elevation in your game though. just think you gotta take time polshing up bars

.. Let me break it down ..


i Aint A Gangsta But You Can Call Me Scarface And Capone
When Tha Nine Cockz it'll Leave Ya Face Flippin Like A Camera Phone

^ abit played to some degree but still was a pretty good punchline..

Tha Nine Popz Like I-Hop Quit Trippin Or Tha Gat Will Sneeze
Let Loose With Tha Slugz And Serve Ya Fuckin Ribz Up Like Applebees

^ another punch .. it was orignal .. didnt hit as hard as ur first bar tho
i Cant Believe These Kidz Still Lookin Foor Punches
i'll Serve "Barz Up" Like Prison Guards Cookin Tha Lunches

^ quotable.. one of the best bars in this peice

Lets Play A New Game And See if Tha Mortician Can identify Tha Bodies
My Pencil is Tha Pump Led Will Fly From Shotties

^ i didnt like this.. simple as fuck typical rhymes.


This is Tha Fifth Bar And They Still Lookin For Word Play
i'm Gonna Just Start Kickin it Back And Let tha Bird Spray

^ simple multi alright bar though
i Havent Seen Anything But Word Play And Punches..These Fools Are Still Talkin?
Ship You Off Like Fed Ex in A Box Cuz Bodies Fill Coffins

^ honestly i didnt get this bar.. because i dont know what a fed ex in a box is lol. expalin please

When i Step Up in Tha Spot i Pop Tha Clutch Like Kobe
My Lines Are Still Smokin it's Like i Got Tha Dutch And A Rollie

l^ this was alright too ..
Now i'm Confused i Dont Kno if This Should Be Tha First or Last Bar
i'll Spark Tha Engine And Run Ya Off Tracks Like Nascar

^ yeah another straight punch ..

punches were on point whole way through .. just think you need to work on some stuff overall this was pretty solid jj. keep it up im looking out for your next drop be eazy man ..
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nice dude im feelin the vibe ya on cuz im feelin the same vibe that g shit

this was good homie not ya best piece but il still liked it couple quotables flow was nice

nice drop
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typical drop from you. some gangsta shit with good flow and multis as standard. i was just sayin the same to Gutta. u and him should do a collab
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Post by complexity »

Exactly ^

I'm going to highlight the bars, I didn't like. The rest were nice.

"i Cant Believe These Kidz Still Lookin Foor Punches
i'll Serve "Barz Up" Like Prison Guards Cookin Tha Lunches "

Corny.

"This is Tha Fifth Bar And They Still Lookin For Word Play
i'm Gonna Just Start Kickin it Back And Let tha Bird Spray "

Not enough, of a creative spin.

"Now i'm Confused i Dont Kno if This Should Be Tha First or Last Bar
i'll Spark Tha Engine And Run Ya Off Tracks Like Nascar"

A little played.

Basically Gutta and Hate are the only true gangster rappers on the site, besides maybe Jesus.

Though both different because Gutta doesn't rely as much on punchlines, which is fine.
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Post by Haz »

true gangster rappers <Explain Complexity
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Post by Brah-Vo »

He menas they're the only ones that can pull it off.
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I Wusnt Askin U Prick
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

shit was tight, fell off in places you pretty much had everything said to you to say about the verse.
so keep droppin dude
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by complexity »

I mean the only ones who use the gangster style correctly.
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