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JUST A COUPLE THOUGHTS FREESTYLE

Post by Cee4 »

this is just a quick lil freestyle. first time i`ve tried writing off the top.


this just a lil freestyle or is it a keystyle,
its just me style aint no one fuckin with Cee style
Cee4 yeah im the muthafuckin truth
spittin dope shit without gettin up in the fuckin booth
i rap about sex drugs n violence u might think my lines played out
i dont give a shit i rap what i know, thats just the way my lifes played out
i got the top 5 punchlines of last month, im ak sprayin them with quotes
a couple dudes claim im swayin the votes when their swayin on the ropes
racist accusations, thats some funny shit cause i hate all you fags equal
i can abuse whites, chinks, muslims n jews but dont mention black people
oh im so bad, oh im so evil,
some dudes so dumb they could fit their brain throught their pee hole
weed no stems and sticks im high as fuck, it only the finest dope im on
these fags dont battle or vote, they`d rather play Dominos Pokemon
some chumps wanna use big words to sound intelligent, it makes me wonder
takin a lot of bullshit statments tryna impress the kids, i got y`all numbers
bitches comin back with changed names, they aint impressin me
not the finished article but punchlines? aint no one stressin me
im god, say amen when addrressin me, lyrical ass kicker
public enemy number one im way past hitler,
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Post by complexity »

I like how you played off some current situations.

"i rap about sex drugs n violence u might think my lines played out
i dont give a shit i rap what i know, thats just the way my lifes played out"

Not much of a rhyme, but I liked it anyway.

"weed no stems and sticks im high as fuck, it only the finest dope im on
these fags dont battle or vote, they`d rather play Dominos Pokemon "

"some chumps wanna use big words to sound intelligent, it makes me wonder
takin a lot of bullshit statments tryna impress the kids, i got y`all numbers"

That's an insurmountably bold statement.
Although acquiring everyones number seems like a tantalizing prospect.
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thanks plex. the last bar u quoted might of been a subliminal
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I liken the response to a response.
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shit was pretty dope kid, started kinda slow then picked up pretty fast, i aint been around to know what ur talkin about all the way thru but it was dope none the the less
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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