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Politically Incorrect #4 - Ft. Ladysam

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Sam - Violet
Plex - Red

love thy neighbor as thou loves himself
claim to follow their savior but cant help themselves
as things are assumed and stories begin to unfold
rumors distributed and lies are being told
reputations damaged due to misrepresentation
Chinese whispers create a whole lot of miscommunication
judgement arise from mistaken identification
people speak fallacious words, and conclusions are created
innocence mislaid, and victims are attainted
i sit and watch as notoriety takes it course against me
to sit and watch this criticism occur, is a shame on me
but my pride is too strong, i wont blame it on me
your like a moderator, feeding words into your assembly
telling them how my life is oh so empty
in the courtroom hearing both disputes
arbitrators reject my side of the truth
your like a judge adjudicating my behaviour
ive learnt to realize your doing me a favor
this judgement makes me stronger
and i learned to live longer
my life is my life, who are you to criticize?
when I'm up on top ill find you at the bottom of my franchise
and he thinks that he knows, the feeling of this inequity
forget it I'm going to handle this case, irrespectively.


Definitely, you checking me? 123

Troubled Times..lead to gritty crimes,*kids* run between city [s]lines[/s] lights
witty minds remind us, of a *little me*, greed, can't imply trust
believe you won't receive, cuz we don't try much; for others to succeed
I'm rushed to retrieve, my cut, or left like I'm fucked
we deceive with our eyes shut, lies crush relationships
we need to build escape ways before taking ship, that's the safe way
money we are chasing it, skyscraper high, them vacation chips
take your pie, everybody's a celebrity, media sensationalist
this cycle is deadly, I-Mus refer to racist shit as a gateway
to this latest rift, now we need to make way
for some positives, putting faith in it, like we're all creationists
see God Exists, supporting statements from past spits
we're monogenous, cuz the fact is, we're all products of his acid,
left to evolve and grow as is, no wonder we're burning the world to ashes,
acting like little girls with glasses, we're all first grade classmates
and in that case, we're finishing last in a rat race
end of sentence, no backspace, we've entered the blackest days
if we actually step back a pace, we have the "will" to act with grace
the skill to not react with haste, to combat this attacking phase
maybe just sit back n blaze, this drop shouldn't be lacking praise
basically we need to appreciate each others accolade's (thank you)
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Once again, I have left feedback on every drop on the first page. A little bit, would be cool.
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did not expect 2 see this 2 be honest..ladysam im'a bit impressed,latest i've seen from u and it was pretty cool i wuz feelin it mostly the whole way,glad u tryna use better vocabulary..but always remember no matter the word make sure the syllables flow decently insteada just tryna use the big words,the flow seemed 2 fall off a bit when u used some of the bigger words..cud just be how i read it as well,none the less ur verse wasnt bad i liked it,props..

onto plex..ok the structure iz woah lol,but it didnt seem'ta effect the outcome of how ur work was presented,i caught onto it pretty easily that wasnt a problem..it seemed as if u struggled with a few lines here n there tryna 2 spit out what u really mean but it was hard..besides that there isnt much i can point out that wasnt bad 2 be honest,both of u had some ok multis,good vocab,description was in there a bit..nice work both a u,keep@it
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ladysam fireee sonnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!

by far the best drop ive ever read from you
definitely stepped up your rhyming without a doubt
great job son!

plex

see God Exists, supporting statements from past spits, we're monogenous, cuz the fact is, we're all products of his acid, left to evolve and grow as is, no wonder we're burning the world to ashes,

^^that was my favorite part

ending was dope rest was off and on but got the point across

fire collab was really feelin this one
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Fixed the structure.

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rh1no: thanks son hahaha

tram: yea i didnt expect him to ask me to do it with him either but it was cool haha
thanks for the feed boys
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Still feelin #2 more then ya others.

LadySam's verse was AWESOME. i liked it alot. The concepts the flow and shit mad nice. Good work LadySam.

Yeh like TGYH said

"Plex, Nice Job For You Aswell Not One Of Your Greatest Cuz i've Seen Alot Better... it's Still Pretty Sick Though.. Always Bring A Nice Smooth Flow into Tha Picture... Think it's One Of Tha Best Flowz On Tha Site.. Ya Also Bring Some Pretty Nasty Vocab Which Ya Also Brought into This Piece.. Lookin Forward To Some More Of Ya Drops.."

^^^^Pretty much agree with what he said.

I'd like to discuss religioin with you someday plex. lol. Would be a very interesting topic to be discussed with you.
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LadySam wrote:rh1no: thanks son hahaha

tram: yea i didnt expect him to ask me to do it with him either but it was cool haha
thanks for the feed boys
wtf...thank you for doing it with me.
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^ haha only because you on a higher level, but your welcomeeeeeeee
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take your pie, everybody's a celebrity, media sensationalist
this cycle is deadly, I-Mus refer to racist shit as a gateway
to this latest rift, now we need to make way
for some positives, putting faith in it, like we're all creationists
see God Exists, supporting statements from past spits
we're monogenous, cuz the fact is, we're all products of his acid,
left to evolve and grow as is, no wonder we're burning the world to ashes,


Dat Shit Caught My Eye^ .
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Post by Cee4 »

this was pretty good.

Ladysams verse was dope the whole way through. the flow was on point and the vocab was excellent.

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rumors distributed and lies are being told
reputations damaged due to misrepresentation
Chinese whispers create a whole lot of miscommunication
judgement arise from mistaken identification
people speak fallacious words, and conclusions are created

dope and true


my life is my life, who are you to criticize?
when I'm up on top ill find you at the bottom of my franchise
and he thinks that he knows, the feeling of this inequity
forget it I'm going to handle this case, irrespectively.

i can relate to this



Plex
honestly your verse started weak and ended weak. when i say weak i mean your not really saying much. it looks good and sounds clever but your not really saying of any interest to me

then we get to the middle of your verse which was fuckin dope

take your pie, everybody's a celebrity, media sensationalist
this cycle is deadly, I-Mus refer to racist shit as a gateway
to this latest rift, now we need to make way
for some positives, putting faith in it, like we're all creationists
see God Exists, supporting statements from past spits
we're monogenous, cuz the fact is, we're all products of his acid,
left to evolve and grow as is, no wonder we're burning the world to ashes

^^fire


overall this was a good read. Ladysam impressed me more than Plex.
although i criticesd a lot of your verse Plex the middle bit i highlighted more than made up for it.

Good job
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Word. I'm glad for the real feedback.
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