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bitch im bashin this text only question? who im mashin with next?
run wit the flashiest sets dont gotta pay fa nikes when ya cashin the checks
leave ya harmed in ya sheets im armed ta da teeth like fab i make it harda ta breath
lay wit dogs ya party wit fleas what goes around comes around its karma disease
try ta follow ma heat n ill ice ya kicks like sub-zero borrowed a cleat
my punches are time released, its only a matter of time before you swallow ya teeth
now im hungry eatin all a ya feast, look fa me in battles but know you callin a beast
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

wasnt bad 4 a quick drop..was this just written or u had this done b4?
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Post by ArmdTaDaTeeth »

just written was pretty quick off the top
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Post by ArmdTaDaTeeth »

thanks by the way
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Post by Brah-Vo »

hey man this was pretty dope for a quickie. good to see some new talent. stay active dude! need membaz/
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Post by Momeijah »

Nothing Spectacular But it Was a Good intro, it Had a Little Of Everything Which is Good To Show Where ur Skills Lie.

try ta follow ma heat n ill ice ya kicks like sub-zero borrowed a cleat
my punches are time released, its only a matter of time before you swallow ya teeth

Favourite Bar^. u Had a Few Solid Punches Throughout And ur Multis Were Consistent. One Thing i Would Work On if i Were u Would Be including More Metaphorical Punchlines To Add Some Ooooh's And Ahhh's if u Know What i Mean Haha.

Good Drop Though id Like To See More From u.
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Post by complexity »

Decent my man. I liked the bar that domino quoted.

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Post by Viral »

for a new user... ima give u props....not many come around wit any lyrical skill...so ur drop was impressive i guess i could say...haha...dat sub zero line was dope...keep it up..n continue to drop..
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