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Cee4
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Please leave feed and ill leave you some


i aint a tailor but im sizin y`all up, im sure you`ll fit a hearse
this dudes blessed, im the greatest rapper to never spit a verse
my lifes good, i got options, but if all else fails i`ll pick up the mic
a last resort, like a bitch who cant get dick so she picks up a dyke
my text like pictures, hieroglyphics, i`ll murder the Pharoes
lyrical crack mah punches terrific, my shit bubbles like Aeros
dudes gettin emotional with scriptures, oh my so beautiful
sorry faggots u aint built for this, try High School Musical
i got a short fuse, call me Daniel Pearl the way i loose my head
in battle ya gonna lose, i`ll give u a head start thats a noose instead
in the battlezone i`ve filled more Yanks coffins than Frank Lucas
no homo n fuck snitches i`ll travel back in time to spank Judas
UK`s finest, check these punches y`all know you cant do this
none of y`all can see me like its midnight and im a black nudist
sex drugs and violence, so bad im good, bless this holy infidel
Gods Of War like Al Queda the rest are only splinter cells
their dead men walking, even with a mirror they couldn`t face life
smash a muslim with a vodka bottle so they know what booze tastes like
ironic, when u were babies u used to suck dummys and now y`all dummys suck
my surgery leave ya lookin like the Mummy or Kanyes after her tummy tuck
wack rappers soundin like geeks, they wouldnt sell signed by 50
im a superstar, heavyweight champ even Orions belt wouldnt fit me
like James Bonds Martini i leave them shakin not stirred
only way they get chicks is if they got caught rapin a bird
hmm cold turkey, i aint dropped in a while n i know y`all love me
brain dead monkeys,well heres another shot of Cee4 for y`all junkies


Aero bubbles is a kind of chocolate. i dont know if you get it in america
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Post by Haz »

I Liked Dis Shit Yo LOL i'll Break Down Whud i Liked




i aint a tailor but im sizin y`all up, im sure you`ll fit a hearse
this dudes blessed, im the greatest rapper to never spit a verse



dudes gettin emotional with scriptures, oh my so beautiful
sorry faggots u aint built for this, try High School Musical

in the battlezone i`ve filled more Yanks coffins than Frank Lucas <<ill Line
no homo n fuck snitches i`ll travel back in time to spank Judas
UK`s finest, check these punches y`all know you cant do this
none of y`all can see me like its midnight and im a black nudist

smash a muslim with a vodka bottle so they know what booze tastes like <<LMMFAO

when u were babies u used to suck dummys and now y`all dummys suck LoL


LoL Dis Shit Wus Funny But Hard At Da Same Time.. Ya Punches Wus Def On Point..
Keep Droppin Aiight..
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this was pretty ill man, i liked it alot, the punches were nice, wordplay was present, and the metas/simis were nice as well overall this was a very solid piece dude
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Dope shit cee4. You're one of the mopst consistent rappers on illest. You always spitting fire.
I like this alot. Flow multies everything was good. Nice work bro.
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cheers. uppin some feed
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Post by ArmdTaDaTeeth »

good job dude whole thing was nice
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