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RH1NO
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not one of your best drops
but the flow was on point pretty much the whole way
dont know seems like maybe ya just tried too hard on this one
cuz ya last couple were way better
steel diggin the feel of ya drops though
keep em comin homie 1
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if You Hungry i'll Let You Eat A Couple Of Lead Chipz
Let Tha Hamma Knock Til You Dead With Ya Head Split
i Dont Throw Gang Signz Just Keep Clipz in Tha Bag
Rock Tha Wrong Color An You'll Catch A Chip in Ya Flag
Real Talk Ya Needa Quit Trippin Or Ya Head Will Get Wrapped With A Bandage
These Niggaz Dont Want Beef Kinda Like Tha Bread And Cheese Of Tha Sandwich
Time For A 21 Gun Salute Fuck A Soldier My Thugs Died
i'm A Lover Not A Hater But i'm Lettin Them Slugs Fly

liked that alot^..LOL@the sandwhich line..but yea decent flow man,only thing i can say iz just keep tryna up ur vocab n creativity n shit..stay@it man,peace
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Post by Momeijah »

Rating - Good.

ur Multis Were Clean, ur Flow Was Clean Until The Last Couple Of Bars And u Had Catchy Lines.

What i Didn't Like Were How u Kinda Watered ur Punches Down in This Piece, But i Did Like How it Was Just a Straight Hypin Yourself Up Drop. Not The Best ive Seen From u And The Punches Were Really The Thing i Missed The Most in This But Nonetheless it Was Solid And Readable, Keep Up The Consistency.
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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Post by Viral »

good shit...i like that niggaz dont want beef like bread n cheese on da sandwhich line...made me laugh..haha...ur multis were nice....keep it up man
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