Hit The Lights

[Momeijah]

Bored And Thought Up This Topic. it's Just About a Random Famous Rapper Who's Fallen Off (Not Eminem Lol) And His Fans Are Giving Him Pressure To Drop Dope New Shit When He's Lost interest Etc But He Doesn't Wnna Stop.

(Yeah i Stole The Name Of This From a Metallica Song Huhu).

ill Leave Ya Hopin-To-Duck-This-Rage, im Still Scoping-For-Lucky-Days ..||
But it's The Shit in My Life That Makes Me Explode-On-This-Fucking-Page ..||
Fans-Bitching i Sit With My Hands-Twitching, Head Spinning And-Fizzing ..||
Planning To Tackle My Demons, Find The Passion But That Man's-Missing ..||
He's Not Me Anymore, But i Gtta Still Supply To The Demand-Of-The-Fans ..||
They Own Me Now Like im The Fat-Of-The-Land, They'll Be Damned-if-i-Can't ..||
Drop Another Dope Track, But im a Family-Man ..||
Telling Myself it's Time To Hang-Up-My-Pad ..||
Because i Feel My Talent Vanishing-Fast, i Wnna Banish-My-Past ..||
it's Drivin Me Crazy To The Point Where i Wnna Brandish-an-Axe ..||
im in This For Me, Not Them, And if i Want ill Drop a Sucky-Rap ..||
Snappin Their Fingers Like ill Pull a Sick Track Out My Fucking-Ass ..||
Oh Could u Deal With This Busy Shit? Dude Don't Even Go-There ..||
When Everyday ur On a Fuckin Bus in The Middle Of Nowhere ..||
it Only Stops When u Got Work To Do, But if u Quit ur Sitting-Pretty ..||
i Really Donno Why im Still Here, i Can't Sleep And The Trips-Are-Shitty ..||
Sometimes i Wnna Go Ballistic Like 'Fuck The Fans-n-Screw-Em' ..||
Rapping Used To Help My Problems But Now it's Adding-To-Them ..||
i Can Deal With Fame, But it's Hard To Stop And Quit-This-Life ..||
Especially With The Fans Reactions Everytime We Hit-The-Lights ..||

[-TraMaTiK-]

i thought u dida remix 2 the song the second i read the title im like 'domino & metallica this shud be interesting' lol flow was good man loved these bars below the best

He's Not Me Anymore, But i Gtta Still Supply To The Demand-Of-The-Fans ..||
They Own Me Now Like im The Fat-Of-The-Land, They'll Be Damned-if-i-Can't ..||
Drop Another Dope Track, But im a Family-Man ..||
Telling Myself it's Time To Hang-Up-My-Pad ..||
Because i Feel My Talent Vanishing-Fast, i Wnna Banish-My-Past ..||
it's Drivin Me Crazy To The Point Where i Wnna Brandish-an-Axe ..||
im in This For Me, Not Them, And if i Want ill Drop a Sucky-Rap ..||
Snappin Their Fingers Like ill Pull a Sick Track Out My Fucking-Ass ..||

word..nice^,i liked the rest as well but those bars above just grabbed my attention,good shit man i liked this drop

[complexity]

Pretty cool.

"ill Leave Ya Hopin-To-Duck-This-Rage, im Still Scoping-For-Lucky-Days ..||
But it's The Shit in My Life That Makes Me Explode-On-This-Fucking-Page ..|| "

Great bar.


"i Can Deal With Fame, But it's Hard To Stop And Quit-This-Life ..||
Especially With The Fans Reactions Everytime We Hit-The-Lights ..||"

Dope bar.

"im in This For Me, Not Them, And if i Want ill Drop a Sucky-Rap ..||
Snappin Their Fingers Like ill Pull a Sick Track Out My Fucking-Ass ..|| "

Shitty bar.

Overall 8/10. Worth the read.

[~Symbolikull~]

nice shit dom, mos def worth the read, you had some tight bars then some bars that fell off here and there. overall it was dope though

[Brah-Vo]

One of your better drops recently. There were 1 or 2 bars that i wasnt really feelin but it was very good. Nice topic as well and nice wordplay. Definately worth the 3 reads i gave it lol.
7/10