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Post by Haz »

tgyh-gutta-bar-for-bar-vt7207.html

This Niggahz a Chump Man..



I Feel Like Writer From da Block Goin Against Writers From da Roc
Who Continue to Bite Like vipers Unda Rocks/
This Kid is Stupid n Done No intellegence In his Raps his Music is Dumb
Beating My Clone Im Abusin My Son Who Cant Spit Fire if He wus Fusin Wit Gunz/
He Gotta Tight Grip On hiz Shit Wen hes Losin-his-Cum U Fuckin in Da Streetz Wen u DOIN A BUM
So a Gangsta Life u Pursuin-Fa-Fun But Like a Canidate You CHOOOSIN To RUN/
Wen a Crew In da Slumz, Askin fa Beef Play Da Piano Cus Readin Musikz Wen ur Graspin a Piece
Like No Showz On da Block u Aint Clap-in-The-Streetz Your illest Career Got You Wrapd-in-So-Deep/
Like Durex Condomz Ya RAPPINZ SO WEAK,Ya mouthz aa Dumpsta i'll Throw Trash-in-So-SPEAK
No Potateoz on Chicken Wen im Mashin YO MEAT Itz Da Bottom of My TIMZ SMASHIN-YO-TEETH/

U AINT WORTH MY TIME DAWG.. 5 Bars.. LEft u in Da GUTTA.. Ya digg
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

this was aight man,2 me ur openin bar was the hardest besides the 2nd bar..but the flow wasnt 2 bad,structure was ehh cud be better but it wasnt horrible keep droppin & make ur shit longer! lol uNo
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Thanks For the Feed... Yeah the Structure Wus a Lil Weird...

I Dont Feel Like the Person i Wus Dissin is Any Competition Datz Why i Ayn Even botha Puttin THought Into Dis Shit Wudd So Eva...
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dis piece was whack
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Dawg Your Whack.... U Dont Want it Wit Me Gutta Ur Washed up Dawg...
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Post by complexity »

Eh, this had some good wordplay.

" I Feel Like Writer From da Block Goin Against Writers From da Roc
Who Continue to Bite Like vipers Unda Rocks/ "

" He Gotta Tight Grip On hiz Shit Wen hes Losin-his-Cum U Fuckin in Da Streetz Wen u DOIN A BUM
So a Gangsta Life u Pursuin-Fa-Fun But Like a Canidate You CHOOOSIN To RUN/ "

It's not a piece that is worth another read, but it's worth the first one.
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Post by Viral »

i think this is the first piece dat made 95% sense to me, some of the other verses of urs...if they were disses er not..had lines i wasnt really sure wat to think of...maybe i wasnt payin much attention...i dunno...but ne ways dis was pretty solid for a diss...da 2 lines plex pointed out were prolly da 2 dat stuck out da most to me.....da flow on it seemed to be on point....keep it up man
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Aiight Thanks For tha Feed
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Lol pretty dope piece homie .
Plex's quoted had ill wordplay.
But why the random piece to Gutta? what did he do? lol
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Post by Viral »

Raiza_shaRpe` wrote:Lol pretty dope piece homie .
Plex's quoted had ill wordplay.
But why the random piece to Gutta? what did he do? lol

he mightve gotten clogged....hazard likes his guttas clean
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