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MY BITCH (subliminal diss)

Post by Kurse »

He thinks his bitch don't call me...

...but he couldn't be more wrong.

My dollar is my dollar...her dollar is my dollar...
...and his dollar is my dollar too.

Enjoy. Leave me ur thoughts.

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Post by Glamtrash »

I like the intro....I really like the first verse. The chorus, however, annoys the hell outta me...it's like "da da da da da daaaaaaaaa"...over, and over, and over.....It wrecks it. I get it - she's your bitch too.

The second verse is, in my opinion, the best on the whole track. Again, I could do without the chorus.

I the third verse is alright, but I find it to be the weakest of all of them. And...Well, you know.
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BEENNJAAMMINNSS!
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Post by Subsist »

This track is really fuckin good. You sound really good on this one, the sound effects are perfect. The chorus is cool. Best thing is that it has a bit of replay value, thats something new for one of your tracks. Only thing is i dont enjoy the my bitch idea. So id replay it for a while cause it sounds good and not caring much about lyrics.
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

lol^..ok?newayz..this was alright man,the verses we definetly the best part about this,the beat wuz cool,ur approach on the chorus i think was good but u didnt need 2 do the 'stretch the word' thing u do occasionally..dont get me wrong it sounds good on certain tracks but not really so much on this one,overall it wasnt bad homie,was feelin this a bit keep droppin man
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Post by Kurse »

Thanks for the feed & opinions up to date so far. Definately helps and I def appreciate it. Thanks again.

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Post by SlickMex »

I heard it on a bulletin,
Wasn't really feeling the whole subject so naturally i didn't like it..
But i did hear "Hey Baby" and thought that was nice as long as the other ones..
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

concepts aight, a lil played, honestly i wasnt really feelin this one as much as some of your other ones, didnt really like the hook, the beat was tight and the verses were on point for the most part. i dont know there was jus somethin about this track that didnt capture the moment wit me, but dont get me wrong it sounds professional and everything jus kinda of a album filler, maybe?

anyways keep doin yuh thing dope boy


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Post by LadySam »

i like this beat, and the intro was good too. i thought the song was pretty funny, and the chorus is catchy in my opinion. i liked the second verse the most, and stop calling girls bitches, thanks.
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sharameet hahaha
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Post by Mephisto »

You definitly can flow, but I really wasn't feelin this to much. You sound just about the exact same on most of your tracks, just try to mix up your flow do something different. You got the skills to do it and in time it will come out. Your verse is good as i said you def can flow, but you need some doper beats, to many pianos these days its gettin played out. I wanna hear you make something raw that makes you wanna nod your head right when you hear the drums pound.
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Post by Omega Bill »

Nice man. Songs funny. Concepts played out but its still good. 2nd verse is the best I think, you sound real good on this one. I agree with Mephisto though, I wanna hear you flowin over some heavy ass drums and jus come raw as hell with it.
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Re: MY BITCH (subliminal diss)

Post by Kurse »

This is an older track I did...but we were talkin about it the other day and it's always been one of my favorites lol ...so if you like a lil big of humor with ur swagger...then this is sumthin you'll dig! lol

So I'm just uppin it so some of the newer heads here on illest can peep it.
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Re: MY BITCH (subliminal diss)

Post by Glamtrash »

Damn's still my favourite, but i found myself walking around work today singing this lol. I could still do without the mass repetition of the chorus, but they can't all be winners haha.

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Re: MY BITCH (subliminal diss)

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Oh...this one's a winner alright haha
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