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Punk Rock Attitude [NEW]

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jeah, some new shit, check it out. feedback is appreciated.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6076720

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*edited with a slightly better mix.
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The flow was good but Im just not fan of that type of beats. And you should raise your vocals make them clearer and maybe rap a bit slower see how that works out.
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Post by MesaR »

lyrically this was pretty ill man, vocals are abit low, beat was sick.. but for me its lyrics over anything, good drop
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..Fuck that gay shit you say on a beat..
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Post by drunken jesus »

heres my mix of it, sounds a lil better
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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UPPING. come on now.

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Post by Momeijah »

This Was Dope, Probably One Of My Favourite Drops Here.

i Like ur Approach To The Delivery Of The Lyrics, How Do i Explain, Umm Jumpy? Haha, But it's Cool And u Have Good Presence On The Mic Which is Always an important Factor. Mixing Was ill, Quality Didn't Bother Me And The Beat Was Nice.

For The Lyrics id Say Meh They Weren't The Best ive Heard From u, Technically They Were Dope But They Weren't My Type. For The Type They Were id Say They Were Dope Though, i Donno if Punchlines Are ur Thing Or Not But a Few More in There Would've Made it More Spicy id Say.

Overall it Was a Dope Track With Replay Value So Keep Dropping.
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AKA SCOTCH HALL, MOE MEIJER & MOMEIJAH.
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Post by Viral »

lyrics wise..it was dope.....the flow wasnt bad....vocal quality was here n there...sometimes it was decent n sometimes it was bad...n dey were a bit low..had to put my speakers up..beat was straight tho......ya voice reminds me of dis one rapper..im tryin to think of his name...if i ever manage to remember ill let ya kno..lol not dat it matters tho...keep droppin dem audios
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Viral wrote:lyrics wise..it was dope.....the flow wasnt bad....vocal quality was here n there...sometimes it was decent n sometimes it was bad...n dey were a bit low..had to put my speakers up..beat was straight tho......ya voice reminds me of dis one rapper..im tryin to think of his name...if i ever manage to remember ill let ya kno..lol not dat it matters tho...keep droppin dem audios
e-40? imo kinda sounds a lil like him at points, my mix is slightly better dunno which you peeped
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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Post by Viral »

drunken jesus wrote:
Viral wrote:lyrics wise..it was dope.....the flow wasnt bad....vocal quality was here n there...sometimes it was decent n sometimes it was bad...n dey were a bit low..had to put my speakers up..beat was straight tho......ya voice reminds me of dis one rapper..im tryin to think of his name...if i ever manage to remember ill let ya kno..lol not dat it matters tho...keep droppin dem audios
e-40? imo kinda sounds a lil like him at points, my mix is slightly better dunno which you peeped

hahaha yeah i think dats who!..lol ill have to listen again to make sure
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

yeah this shit was pretty dope, quality was low but thats it, flow and lyrics were right on point
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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