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Perfect Combination ft.theoneyouhate

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Complexity:Yellow
Theoneyouhate:Blue

Me and my crew are packing the nines
'take guns into your dreams' cuz I'll cross the back of your mind
while your sleepin, 'enter your cerebrum'
and like Talib, leave both of your 'Ear Drums Leaking!'
the 'writer strikes', 'no guild (guilt)' I'm 'so skilled'
'flows ill' I'm 'taking down this industry' like demolishin an 'old mill'
'hold still' woah! thats the 'punch of the week'
fuck 'mayweather' I'm not a 'fan of spring', plus i'm 'way better'
when I 'jump on the beat' I destruct and destroy
it's like I'm still under 18 cuz you can't 'fuck with the boy'
let me 'interrupt quick', fuck, shit, bitch
even 'goth chicks' won't convince me to 'cut this shit'
you really want me to get back to the subject
ok, like a condom, I'm putting the 'wrap to the public'
like what-ever, who can really write better hostile flows
Domino, that's possible, but I'm hip hop, he is rock and roll
which is cool, but in battles, I'm still the boss of those
you 'gotta admit', cuz I get results like hospitals


When Tha Tool is Cocked i'll Let it Blam Kid
Damn Kid My Styles Hot And Tha Flow is Rancid
i'll Let Loose With A Tech 'Til it Starts Rapein Ya Friend
i'll Rob Ya Fuckin Chain And Give it Back Just Ta Take it Again
if Ya Wanna Throw Fists You'll Be Quick Ta Get Ya Ass Kicked
i'll Eat Some Batteries Turn Reptile Then Start Spittin Acid
i Aint Hatin On A Chick But i'll Be Quick Ta Pull A Bitch Man
When i'm Onna Track i Keep Em Sweatin Like They Rockin Wrist Bands
i'm Gonna Sit Back And Watch Ya Run Fa Ya Life And Scream
Let You Pick Tha Weapon You Can Get Caught With A Knife Or Beam
i'll Poke Ya Man Like Pokemon Be Quick Ta Pull Tha Hyper Beam
Go Ahead And Test Me On A Track Cuz i Roll With Tha Nicest Team
i Dont Gotta Normal Sway i Gotta Awkward Swerve
My Punches Are Uppercuts That'll Leave Ya Lost Fa Words
Keep Playin Harry Potter And You'll Be Quick Ta Catch A Magic Beam
i Better Start Writin "Romeo And Juliette" Cuz it'll Be A "Tragic Scene"
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When Tha Tool is Cocked i'll Let it Blam Kid
Damn Kid My Styles Hot And Tha Flow is Rancid

^Good correlation ^

i'll Let Loose With A Tech 'Til it Starts Rapein Ya Friend
i'll Rob Ya Fuckin Chain And Give it Back Just Ta Take it Again

^comical, a Jadakiss kind of line

if Ya Wanna Throw Fists You'll Be Quick Ta Get Ya Ass Kicked
i'll Eat Some Batteries Turn Reptile Then Start Spittin Acid

Alright.

i Aint Hatin On A Chick But i'll Be Quick Ta Pull A Bitch Man
When i'm Onna Track i Keep Em Sweatin Like They Rockin Wrist Bands

Decent

i'm Gonna Sit Back And Watch Ya Run Fa Ya Life And Scream
Let You Pick Tha Weapon You Can Get Caught With A Knife Or Beam

Word. I like the aggressiveness.

i'll Poke Ya Man Like Pokemon Be Quick Ta Pull Tha Hyper Beam
Go Ahead And Test Me On A Track Cuz i Roll With Tha Nicest Team

I am damn nice. Great point.

i Dont Gotta Normal Sway i Gotta Awkward Swerve
My Punches Are Uppercuts That'll Leave Ya Lost Fa Words

Good play on words.

Keep Playin Harry Potter And You'll Be Quick Ta Catch A Magic Beam
i Better Start Writin "Romeo And Juliette" Cuz it'll Be A "Tragic Scene"

Pretty ill finisher.

Keep it up dude. Nice collab.
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Post by Haz »

Are u Fuckin Serious LMAO?!?! U Guys Had To Give Feed To EACH OTHA?!
Dis Was a Dope Collab WTF is Goin on With Illest... ILLEST IS DEAD<< GUNNA BE IN SCRIPTURES TOMMOROW...

Now Lemme Break Dis Down...

it's like I'm still under 18 cuz you can't 'fuck with the boy'
let me 'interrupt quick', fuck, shit, bitch
even 'goth chicks' won't convince me to 'cut this shit' <<< This lil Part was Strong



fuck 'mayweather' I'm not a 'fan of spring', plus i'm 'way better'
^^ LOL.

which is cool, but in battles, I'm still the boss of those
you 'gotta admit', cuz I get results like hospitals
^^ Nice...

Soo Plex i See U Fuckin wit ya Wordplay..

THAONEYOUHATE...



i'll Let Loose With A Tech 'Til it Starts Rapein Ya Friend
i'll Rob Ya Fuckin Chain And Give it Back Just Ta Take it Again
^^ lol Liked This line.. i Hurd Somethin Similar From Ruger...


i'm Gonna Sit Back And Watch Ya Run Fa Ya Life And Scream
Let You Pick Tha Weapon You Can Get Caught With A Knife Or Beam
i'll Poke Ya Man Like Pokemon Be Quick Ta Pull Tha Hyper Beam <--- Nice Multis..
Go Ahead And Test Me On A Track Cuz i Roll With Tha Nicest Team

i Dont Gotta Normal Sway i Gotta Awkward Swerve
My Punches Are Uppercuts That'll Leave Ya Lost Fa Words
Keep Playin Harry Potter And You'll Be Quick Ta Catch A Magic Beam
i Better Start Writin "Romeo And Juliette" Cuz it'll Be A "Tragic Scene"
^^^ LOL@ Harry Potter Line... ya Multis wus On point Here 2..


i Mean i Wouldnt Call Yall The Perfect Combination..in My Opinion..

But U Cant Be Cheated Out the Props Both u Deserve Fa This Collab..
it Wus Pretty Decent.. Maybe u Can Have a Round Two!!.. Lol...

GOOD SHIT .( LEAVE FEED TOMMOROW ON ILLEST IS DEAD PIECE) Lmfao
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Thanks for the feed dude.
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this was dope, this is why complexity got my vote in best collab dude of the year. multis punches sims metaphores the whole 9 yards, it was all straight fire, dispite a couple of bars, complexity i liked the way you expressed your self with the sims mettas and that, and JJ you have elevated crazy, starting to think you biting bars, lmao jokes good shit

let me break this down.


Me and my crew are packing the nines
'take guns into your dreams' cuz I'll cross the back of your mind


Dope Opener, Really A Attention Grabber

while your sleepin, 'enter your cerebrum'
and like Talib, leave both of your 'Ear Drums Leaking!'

lol i get this, nice concept shaky rhymes though

the 'writer strikes', 'no guild (guilt)' I'm 'so skilled'
'flows ill' I'm 'taking down this industry' like demolishin an 'old mill'

Creative, Not As hard hitting As Your other punches

'hold still' woah! thats the 'punch of the week'
fuck 'mayweather' I'm not a 'fan of spring', plus i'm 'way better'

Lmao.. Fucking DOPE..

when I 'jump on the beat' I destruct and destroy
it's like I'm still under 18 cuz you can't 'fuck with the boy'

reminds me of some shit i could of thought of, lol straight bar
l
et me 'interrupt quick', fuck, shit, bitch
even 'goth chicks' won't convince me to 'cut this shit'

lol topic of punch is mad played, executed it decent

you really want me to get back to the subject
ok, like a condom, I'm putting the 'wrap to the public'

rofl another solid bar

like what-ever, who can really write better hostile flows
Domino, that's possible, but I'm hip hop, he is rock and roll

haha, nice shit
which is cool, but in battles, I'm still the boss of those
you 'gotta admit', cuz I get results like hospitals

Ehh Weak Ending IMO

When Tha Tool is Cocked i'll Let it Blam Kid
Damn Kid My Styles Hot And Tha Flow is Rancid

Not A Bad Opener.

i'll Let Loose With A Tech 'Til it Starts Rapein Ya Friend
i'll Rob Ya Fuckin Chain And Give it Back Just Ta Take it Again

Lmao, Liked This Bar

if Ya Wanna Throw Fists You'll Be Quick Ta Get Ya Ass Kicked
i'll Eat Some Batteries Turn Reptile Then Start Spittin Acid

Good Shit, Rhymescheme was a little off though. flow was not great

i Aint Hatin On A Chick But i'll Be Quick Ta Pull A Bitch Man
When i'm Onna Track i Keep Em Sweatin Like They Rockin Wrist Bands

Word This was alright aswell, a decent punch

i'm Gonna Sit Back And Watch Ya Run Fa Ya Life And Scream
Let You Pick Tha Weapon You Can Get Caught With A Knife Or Beam

Decent.


i'll Poke Ya Man Like Pokemon Be Quick Ta Pull Tha Hyper Beam
Go Ahead And Test Me On A Track Cuz i Roll With Tha Nicest Team

Lol, This Was Good Too
i Dont Gotta Normal Sway i Gotta Awkward Swerve
My Punches Are Uppercuts That'll Leave Ya Lost Fa Words

Uhh, Anit Really Felling This one
Keep Playin Harry Potter And You'll Be Quick Ta Catch A Magic Beam
i Better Start Writin "Romeo And Juliette" Cuz it'll Be A "Tragic Scene"

Nice Closer.

overall this was fire, abit Dulled down with some avg bars, but it was deff worth the read, upping some feedback
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