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Complexity ft. Tramatik - Unstoppable

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Plex: Red
Tramatik: Blue

do i gotta create a verse n castrate a curse
n let the hate burst n desinigrate worse
drop a few lines that make u hate how i disperse
my thoughts before u it shows on ur plate first
aint no way u poppin a shot or coppin a drop
im bout'ta be rockin ya knot n lockin some cops
in they own cell justa fuckin show u i own hell
murderin murderers and n throw my own shells
at anyone tryna speak shit fuck this weak shit
from rappers singin songs,i always eat spits
justa throw it up again and explain the soul purpose
my brain iz a game thats waitin'ta show purpose
but u bitches keep tryna kill my dreams n wishes
so im'a slash yall till ya blood runs like streams with fishes


Hypothetically, I can fill the mic kinetically
with twice the energy and use that to fight the enemy
essentially, increasing the power exponentially
potentially, blowing up the world, and preventing me
from conquering my identity, this is art imitating life
in the face of strife, until I'm incinerating mics
stimulate your sight like light I penetrate when bright
in contrast my dark flows emulate the night
until my past and my future are identically alike
the strength in me will fight until mentally I'm right
while I'm ascending the most menacing of heights
my adrenaline has spiked with every sentence that i write
the pen has been tremendous when I'm attempting to excite
as I'm entering my flight the gas is ready to ignite
who can contend when I strike with the venom in this bite
pay attention to the spite, cut the tension with a knife
don't forget to get every inch when your measuring the hype
I'm not generous just nice, the genesis of life
be hesitant to write which is some excellent advice
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

plex your verse was pretty dope man, dlow kinda fell off towards the end, but the beginnin was fire as fuck man. tramatik i dont know what it is but, everything i read from you seems more poetic or spoken word not rap, so it rarely fits for me, not to take away from your verse though.
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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