Keep It Hip Hop

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Tue Jan 01, 2008 7:05 pm

I'M HKX AND I'M NEW 2 DIS SHIT AND I JUS WANT NIGGAZ FEEDBACK ON MY TRACKS BIG UP 2 DA BOY KURSE 4 HELPIN' OUT ON DIS SHIT.

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Tue Jan 01, 2008 7:07 pm

ill leave sum feedback tommorrow im tired as fuck and dont feel like it right now but ill deff. get back at u wit that

MesaR · Post by **MesaR** » Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:19 pm

this was a clean track, props. lyrics were straight you brang good swag to the beat.. shit was fire topic was cool two..only thin i can say to work on is your lyrics more metaphores and shit.. but you got talent dont waste it.. keeep it up

Dead Silence · Post by **Dead Silence** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 2:42 am

nice man
the beat is really good did u make it?
lyrics and flow seems real straight.
keep grindin on this shit man
big props to u and AME

Viral · Post by **Viral** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 7:32 am

dats dat shit right dere!..haha....hot stuff man...if i was a kid id believe u like santa clause..lol shits great....good to see u droppin audio on illest too man...keep it up...n get at me...we'll jump ona track

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 6:05 pm

Viral wrote:dats dat shit right dere!..haha....hot stuff man...if i was a kid id believe u like santa clause..lol shits great....good to see u droppin audio on illest too man...keep it up...n get at me...we'll jump ona track

lol good lookin on da props nigga shit u already kno im sick wit it nigga i had 2 put keep it hip hop on illest lol gotta keep it real a nigga like me is born 2 become a legend on dis hip hop/rap shit i got u on dat shit nigga jus holla at me whenever u want a nigga 2 jump on sum shit fam lol im always down on n e thing dawg stay up nigga 1.

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 6:11 pm

Dead Silence wrote:nice man
the beat is really good did u make it?
lyrics and flow seems real straight.
keep grindin on this shit man
big props to u and AME

naw dawg dats a beat 4rm bone thugs n harmony called bump in da trunk dis dj i kno told me 2 murk da beat so i was like fuck it and it is wat it is now thanks 4 da props nigga stay up nigga peace

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Wed Jan 02, 2008 6:20 pm

SequencE wrote:this was a clean track, props. lyrics were straight you brang good swag to the beat.. shit was fire topic was cool two..only thin i can say to work on is your lyrics more metaphores and shit.. but you got talent dont waste it.. keeep it up

no doubt nigga thanks 4 da feedback and props da thing tho on dis track it wasn't really bout da metaphore's shit was more bout da topic and how hip hop is fucked up wit all dis commercial shit u kno dat garbage shit on da radio dat whack shit lol but yea if i wanted i could've used more metaphore's but i was like fuck it imma switch it up a lil bit so niggaz could talk bout wat im sayin on da track, stay up nigga 1.

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:53 am

you kinda sound like this dude solo from this site, im sure kurse can tell you bout him, this shit was dope tho homie, flow and delivery were pretty consistant and the lyrics were aight, went well but like sequence said you could prolly step it up lyrically and when and if you do that you would truley be on another lever fo sho homie

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:21 am

~Symbolikull~ wrote:you kinda sound like this dude solo from this site, im sure kurse can tell you bout him, this shit was dope tho homie, flow and delivery were pretty consistant and the lyrics were aight, went well but like sequence said you could prolly step it up lyrically and when and if you do that you would truley be on another lever fo sho homie

thanks 4 da props nigga like i told sequence tho da track wasn't suppose 2 be on dat krazy lyrical shit i do got dat krazy lyrical shit i jus wanted 2 get my point across and let niggaz kno aint everybody gotta be on dat bubble gum rap shit u kno simple as dat thanks 4 da props nigga stay up 1.

~Symbolikull~ · Post by **~Symbolikull~** » Fri Jan 04, 2008 11:21 am

fo sho i feel you

complexity · Post by **complexity** » Fri Jan 04, 2008 2:46 pm

Definitely not a lyrical track and I'm tired of this concept.

But you sound good and I'm looking forward to hearing more from you.

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Fri Jan 04, 2008 3:05 pm

complexity wrote:Definitely not a lyrical track and I'm tired of this concept.

But you sound good and I'm looking forward to hearing more from you.

thanks 4 da props dawg dis is a really old track way back b4 kurse even started rhymin i jus needed 2 find da right beat 4 it and i layed it down bout a year ago lol stay up my nigga 1.

Cee4 · Post by **Cee4** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 12:28 am

this was decent man. lyrics were average but the flow was good.
i thought since you were talkin about how u were doin real hip hop n that you woulda stepped it up lyrically but yeah it was still pretty decent.

good choice of beat too

HKX · Post by **HKX** » Sat Jan 05, 2008 12:55 am

Cee4 wrote:this was decent man. lyrics were average but the flow was good.
i thought since you were talkin about how u were doin real hip hop n that you woulda stepped it up lyrically but yeah it was still pretty decent.

good choice of beat too

i feel u dawg good lookin' out on da props stay up nigga 1.

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