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Post by Viral »

i still aint no pro at the mixing aspect of it all...but this is way better than the previously released one....
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Post by Kurse »

I've offered like 8 times to mix the song for you mayne...u just don't want me to do it for sum reason. haha
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Post by -TraMaTiK- »

yea this version iz better man..the mixin wasnt bad but it cudda been better..newayz both of ur flows were nice and lyrics were tight,some parts sounded mumbled or just not loud enough..but it wasnt bad dude..keep droppin
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Post by Viral »

word...thanks for da feed tramatik..much appreciated.......

Kurse...i kno...i could let u..but dat would be too easy....only way ima learn is doin it myself.....cant get better if i dont do it

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Post by 16 Micz »

hmmm i like it, that little pitch blend towards the end gave me a headache, i think the hook was a lil too slow too but it was good wit the beat....lyrics were on point needless to say, mixing was ok too...keep it up
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Post by drunken jesus »

mixing on your parts was definately better, didn't like ekoms new verse, ekoms sounded better on the first you sound better on the second lmao, mix the two together and your set imo, the hook sounds a lil better without the phaser on it i dunno, imo the hook is the weakest part cause it doesn't contribute much to the track i think its mainly cause of the beat though

kurse obviously if you or i mixed it would probably sound better but i get where virals coming from, best way to learn is through trial and error especially on your own shit
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Post by Kurse »

Nah I feel him. And that's cool...I want him to do, is to learn it himself. I just offer to do it cuz sometimes I and just need a lil sumthin to do. But on the other hand...ur not gonna learn to mix by attempting to mix the same song over and over again. There's only so much play that a track can get...you'll get ur practice the more songs you record and mix.
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Post by Viral »

right but that other version sucked...lol
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

is it your first and second viral? then ekoms is last? ok

all verses were dope, ekoms was a lil short but all in all nicely re-done tho

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Post by Viral »

thanks for da feed yall...appreciate it....im workin ona another track right now...ekoms is posed to be on....so depending on if he ever writes his verse or not...it might jst be me on da track....so keep on a look out...annnnddd

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Post by complexity »

Word.

I think this one was mixed better.

The lyrics were definitely on point. You two are a deadly combination because you think a lot a like.

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Post by Subsist »

the song is much better now but i dont like the new ekoms verse, switch back to the old one.
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Post by Viral »

thanks for da fee yall....umm im not sure y everyone likes his old verse better?....flow wise?..lyric wise?..cuz dis version i think is alot better flow wise...fits da beat right...


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