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Corrupted Nation

Post by Arvincible »

yo, i just wanted to drop somethin more serious and realistic this time so you intellects out there can see that I'm real. Tell me what you think



Figure this, the vigorous government's got us twisted like licorice
the liquor "bliss", got us tipsy and turnin to laws listed, too rigorous
brainwashed till our minds are figure-less
As a nation this altercation will only just injure us
its plain to see the climates been changing and changin' us,
open up perception to see this nation's is dangerous
we fall distracted, temptations, blinded by the world they created
and unstable political situations manipulating the nation
We have our rights but they provoke us to never use em
by throwin shit in our lives to leave us lost in confusion
reality crossed with delusions, we forgettin even the choices we choosin
this ain't 4 amusement, we have to see the mistakes that we makin
we put our lives under their shell to see it's theirs for the takin
They bein completely dishonest breakin the promise that we are free
by secludin the knowledge we need, to be where we needed to be
we are made like machines taught and raised to believe
that we know what we're doin but really they leave us deceived
we early learned to fear the power controlled by one person alone
but then turn around and cherish the freedoms individuals own
get grown, what i mean is we must work together as a team
and stopped bein maneuvered by these controversial government schemes
Im tired of following blindly to these clever politicians
Only a nation as a whole impacts wit a proper decision...
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

first off what does arvincible mean?

second this shit was pretty fuckin solid and dope. concept is played but i like the way you relayed ur point across. shit was dope man, a couple quotables here and there. it was well worth the read
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hey thanks a lot man. I feel you on the fact that the topic aint so fresh, but it's so damn hard to find something to write about nowadays... I'm just takin a jab at the subject myself. lol "Arvincible" comes from my name, (Arvin) and yeah Vince Carter already took "Vinsanity" so that's how got it.
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you never answered my question about your name homie
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My name is arvin, and I play ball, my homies added the "cible" cuz it sounded fresh.

Invincible = Arvincible

Ya get it?
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well invincible means indistructable, so arvincible sounds like you are-vincible, like you can easily be beatin, you know what im sayin...?
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lol damn that sucks, but i thought of that before, but i guess it sounds better if you knew me.
I've had that name forever and i take it as "Indestructible" plus my name. I don't plan to change it either. Haha now if we ever battle someday, you got something on me already lol
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