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jus wait n peep
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this is straight off the dome
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this was not bad. flow was good and the lyrics were straight although sometimes for a diss i think u should rap a bit slower so people can understand what your sayin better. u were rappin a bit too fast at times and i struggled to make out what u were sayin. but yeah this was good and i dont think Tramatik woulda beat this if he had accepted the battle.
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Post by drunken jesus »

beats annoying as hell & the vocals are a lil low, flow overall was straight, delivery was kinda weak needed more emphasis on the rhymes, lyrics were solid for a free, i usually hate your voice but it didn't sound as bad on this, overall its a solid free & alot better than tramatiks response so thats all that matters really
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by complexity »

Yah. I agree with c4.

I wasn't feeling this that much, but a lot of things were better.

I hated the beat as well and the vocals are definitely more blended into the beat
than they are put on top of it.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

yeah this was done at 12am and i was blown out off of that blue berry, and i understand that quality is shit but i have no idea how to mix and shit, so i appreciate the feed on the freestyle
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uppin the feed
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Post by Viral »

lol i remember dis beat..haha...it does get annoying tho...the lyrics were decent tho...it was obvious u were freestylin...dere was a part i think somewhere in da beginin dat its like u kinda start mumblin almost cuz ur not sure wtf to say...hahaha...its funny...over all tho...the vocals were pretty straight quality obviously wasnt taht great...beat woulda been good..but it was too repetetive....and i def think u killed tramatik on dis track....keep droppin tho man
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appreciate the feed viral
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