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i was never broke but i was po, my life wasnt rock n roll
no cryin like a ho, i got on with the show im no tortured soul
im straight, i been 12 rounds with karma now we`re equal
been through real beefs, i aint wanna, but im down for a sequel
its a fine line but a distinction, like shit talkin from bitchin
im intelligent but do dumb shit, im a walkin contradiction
but as usual my faults large, so they got me boot outta college
cause of a bullshit assault charge, they aint dispute my knowledge
fuck em, i landed on my feet with a new job n a company car
gotta laugh at these soundclick rappers thinkin their gon be a star
in this world im movin up, but i remain stuck in my ways
i dont give a fuck, i`ll be the same till the times up on my days
for now i got people anticipating me like an Osama speech
dead Yanks, i got the battlezone lookin like Omaha beach
ive been runnin this net text, ha ha its a dot com demolition
only battler gettin respect since i aint got Doms competition
i pick rappers apart, like forensics when their faced with a murda
future elected champ, n it aint got nothin to do with my race or my lover
in crew battles im the best, i could give a shit whos the sicker set
since 12 a weed n liquor vet, i seen plenty go, in truth im sick a death
my familys cursed with cancer, but i stay puffin on my cigarette
the reaper got me at gunpoint he just aint pulled the trigga yet......
Last edited by Cee4 on Thu Jan 10, 2008 11:20 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Post by Haz »

... CR@CK....

Yo.. i Had the "Get Em Daddy" Instrumental On When i Was Readin Dis..
in My head it Flowed Nice With Da Beat... But yo.. i Liked This piece


its a fine line but a distinction, like shit talkin from bitchin
im intelligent but do dumb shit, im a walkin contradiction
^^ Yo this Shit.. it Wus Hard on Some Real ... How u Explained Shit durin ya Bar..


fuck em, i landed on my feet with a new job n a company car
gotta laugh at these soundclick rappers thinkin their gon be a star <<I>>> my familys cursed with cancer, but i stay puffin on my cigarette
the reaper got me at gunpoint he just aint pulled the trigga yet......


i Liked da Drop C.. Keep Droppin Son..
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Post by Omega Bill »

This drop was real tight man. A lot of your bars didn't need explaining, they explained themselves and I like that.

Good job, bro.
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Post by Brah-Vo »

This was a dope piece cee.
This is the best that i've seen from you in a while.
Looks like you aint rusty at all lol.

Fave bars:

i was never broke but i was po, my life wasnt rock n roll
no cryin like a ho, i got on with the show im no tortured soul

its a fine line but a distinction, like shit talkin from bitchin
im intelligent but do dumb shit, im a walkin contradiction

my familys cursed with cancer, but i stay puffin on my cigarette
the reaper got me at gunpoint he just aint pulled the trigga yet......
^^^ closer was fkn dope.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

id say this shit was pretty fuckin dope man, all the your quotable bars are stated above, nice shit kid
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Viral »

i def liked dis piece...it sticks to the title "real talk"....haha....rhyme scheme wasnt all amazing but it didnt have to be...flow was pretty good too...keep it up man
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Post by Cee4 »

thanks for the feedback people
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