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Common Reality #1 - The Introduction

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A series of drops that will feature complexity and myself, possibly a few other guests, scattered throughout the series. You can mention if you might want to have a guest spot in this post, but they will be surprises and who will be selected is based on the plot.

Red = Street Smart aka Plex
Yellow = Martinez aka Raizor Sharpe

Yo..I'm on the streets everday stuck in cold//
every morning ducking police on this dusty road//
I'm out hustling whether it's rain or snow//
selling cocaine and dro, with lethal grains of blow//
money unobtainable,my situation is unchangeable//
around every corner theirs a dangerous foe//
it's unexplainable how I remain able//
to sustain this fable like life-style, I'm street faithful//
trying to keep my brain stable, when the games fatal//
and i'm destined to die in my self destructive grave hole//
as everyday goes, i'll never get a deal from a label//
steal from a cradel just to put a meal on the table//
fuck Kanye West, I want to forget my past//
cuz everything I did is what has set me back//
what if I eat lunch where the preppys sat//
and I was the player who intercepts the pass//
instead of the one who has sex with staff//
no wonder my teacher said I was best in class//
she liked adolescent ass,that's why i got all f's-in-class//
the rest is past, i hope my death is fast//
the fact is I know I won't find a better way//
so I'll hustle like basketball practice, everyday like it was yesterday//


Hot broads, fast cars and big money
top speed dont stop, then proceed to stick honeys
haha this is a kings life pop a bottle of champagne
full throttle baby i get money like i swing yae
Million dolla mansion twenty fows on the jag
closet fulla nikes coz the hoes dig my swag
got 55 maids from the south of the border
keep they mouth shut, when i give em my order
got a garden with exotic plants and animals
most of em vegetarian but others are cannibals
gotta be ruthless in this business as god as my witness
i vow to be sickless and strike with jaguar quickness
come to think of it i own a football team
meatheads running at each other is not what it all seems
with all this cash and with all this money
i sit in bed thinkin what God has planned fa me.
but when i sleep i feel cold and empty
in my sleep, i grow old, and cry out for somebody to help me


These characters will be developed more in future writtens.
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Post by UNeeK »

WHOA ..MAN

that wus good

I really Digg Tha Ide of the 2 opposite charectorz

Nice shit man


Plex and Raiza...___Good Work GuyS
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Post by Arvincible »

I want a part in this.

It sounds like some good shit is about to built in this story.

It is gonna be like a story right?
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Post by complexity »

Yes. The direction will be a lot more apparent when the next drop comes out.
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she liked adolescent ass,that's why i got all f's-in-class//
the rest is past, i hope my death is fast//
the fact is I know I won't find a better way//
so I'll hustle like basketball practice, everyday like it was yesterday//

Part i Enjoyed the Most^.. Yo Plex u Switched ya Style up in Dis lol
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Post by Glamtrash »

This was fuckin sick. Can't wait to see more. Could def. see the change in your writing style, Plex. Good shit guys.
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Post by Haz »

Honestly.. i Dont Feel Like this Wus a Collab.. i Aint Even Notice Raizas Verse Type Shit Lmfao..

But i Gave U Feed Plex...
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I'm out hustling whether it's rain or snow//
selling cocaine and dro, with lethal grains of blow//
money unobtainable,my situation is unchangeable//
around every corner theirs a dangerous foe//
it's unexplainable how I remain able//
to sustain this fable like life-style, I'm street faithful//
trying to keep my brain stable, when the games fatal//
and i'm destined to die in my self destructive grave hole//
as everyday goes, i'll never get a deal from a label//
steal from a cradel just to put a meal on the table//

sick shit from plex^wuz feelin that

gotta be ruthless in this business as god as my witness
i vow to be sickless and strike with jaguar quickness
come to think of it i own a football team
meatheads running at each other is not what it all seems
with all this cash and with all this money
i sit in bed thinkin what God has planned fa me.
but when i sleep i feel cold and empty

liked that the most from u raiza^,but it seems like towards the end u kinda tried 2 mold ur character already,like the 'live life in the fast line' type dude,yet he's alone n shit..but i cud be wrong just my perspective keep it goin guys it wuz ncie
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Post by Brah-Vo »

word. thanks for the feed all. Uppin .
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money unobtainable,my situation is unchangeable//
around every corner theirs a dangerous foe//
it's unexplainable how I remain able//
to sustain this fable like life-style, I'm street faithful//
trying to keep my brain stable, when the games fatal//

fav line from plex


i liked the way yours was raizor, saying how you had all these things but in the end you werent really that happy.

good stuff guys
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