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Fans Throwing fits like "haz turn more versatile" treat rapping like religion "convert-ya-Style"
mommy gambling soon as she making loot its up to young haz to rob a clincic for a radiation-booth..

The reason im Pure battle style is Cause i Can Go 50 For 50 Get a 100 Quickly cus im Sick B
i Dont feel like Switchin up Listen up if U think i'll hit the Radi-o ur blowin lines with a krazy ho

now that you rappin the drugs gone i cant take that path i wont rap "snappin" in Love songs..
C.t. got problems well im Like da Solution,i'll have the mixtape circkit on lock u Dont "Like da Solution"..

you remember me as a wack memory, well im "100 Percent in dis" like i Lived a century..
i wont diss no body in this rhyme,im "2012 in the Flesh" i Leave no-body-in-This-Time..


the reason i been putting disses out "steerin directly" because you will either fear or respect me..
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now that you rappin the drugs gone i cant take that path i wont rap "snappin" in Love songs..
C.t. got problems well im Like da Solution,i'll have the mixtape circkit on lock u Dont "Like da Solution".

liked that bar the most^it wuz smooth for the most part i wuz feelin it..u shud write in this kinda perspective more often if u get what im sayin...stay@it tho homie
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Post by complexity »

Definitely one of my favorite pieces from you.

It was smooth and almost no forced rhymes. No retarded - far fetched wordplay.

I'm feeling it. The rhyme scheme was easy to follow as well.

The biggest beef, I have with this drop, is the punches were executed as well as usual,
but that's something, I'm sure you can understand.

Keep it up.
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Post by Viral »

ima have to agree wit plex on dis one.....not havin to wonder wat ur sayin made dis a nice piece...lol...rhyme scheme was straight...wasnt all that...but def worth the read....keep droppin man
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

this was dope man, nice shit homie
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Probably one of the dopest pieces i've seen from ya. flow was nice and so were the multies, none were forced and like plex said no forced wordplay. dope shit haz. keep up.
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Post by Glamtrash »

This is one of the better pieces i've read from you. Flowed nice.

The reason im Pure battle style is Cause i Can Go 50 For 50 Get a 100 Quickly cus im Sick B
i Dont feel like Switchin up Listen up if U think i'll hit the Radi-o ur blowin lines with a krazy ho
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