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The Final Destruction - part 2

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I specialize in confidence, mesmerize an audience like god in a sense
the rhymes electrify the consciousness, step inside where weapons lie
a promise land, anonymous as a common man, synonymous with contraband
where all wrong began...
My mind is corrupted with a criminal design, each line is constructed
with subliminals in mind, until mankind is destructed
and refined, I'm the illest individual to rhyme
devine is to simple to describe, when I hit at a critical time
in history,i mystified initially, was young coming onto the scene
held onto my dream now I hypnotize officially
realistically, I never missed a snare, I'm on a different beat
the list is there, Ekoms, Viral, Jesus, and me?
please this is a free..I don't give a shit to care
where you place me, why would i care this time?
I swear in like Obama, oath of office, tear your mind
I'm like a druggy stuck in hallucinations, the ugly duckling
whose safe when, I break out the gates like a lion, in a den
I'm not even trying, yet I'm defining like the myans
you get fucked and, one tournament to go, that's enough then
one good battle left in me, even if I don't crush them
that will be my last destruction

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Post by M.O.B »

sick word play man...
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Post by Brah-Vo »

Yo Plex .. This was a good Piece.
Nice Wordplay
Your Flow Was Okay, It was here and there but still readable
Your multies were nice and the topic was very... Sentimental? If that's the right word Lol.
Are you retiring from battling?
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Post by Glamtrash »

Good shit.

Not that I expect anything less.

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a promise land, anonymous as a common man, synonymous with contraband
where all wrong began...
My mind is corrupted with a criminal design, each line is constructed
with subliminals in mind, until mankind is destructed
and refined, I'm the illest individual to rhyme
devine is to simple to describe, when I hit at a critical time
^^ Nice..

This Wus a Good Piece.. Shit wus Solid..
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Post by complexity »

Thanks a lot all.
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