Lil sumsum

[M.O.B]

excessive successes, in this game as an adolencent, rippin up the stage in a fuckin second
wen i hop out i sqeeze three mentally, taking out ur legs is the penilty

around here ur now as a has been, ill end ya time quick wit the sound of a gavlin
playin u like madden, talents what ur lackin, i see ur ass standin so this is why im clappin
bitches i be mac'n, the dough i be stackin, ur in my face, so a fool i be actin

ur moves are hastie, ur blood is tastie, dont be a bitch man, come n face me
ill put u in the ground to be found by the blood hounds, now hedin north bound
for the fourth round, its gettin really dark n ur messin wit the torch now
ur gettin really smart, but ur messin wit the source now

i got more back then a motha fuckin camel n if u beef, heres a motha fuckin sample
try n run it, n ur gonna get trampled dishin out a handfull, servings more then ample
make a choice now n remember its a gamble

i smoke weed that would make ur nose bleed, have u thinkin high like Coheed
see wit out me is like havin dro wit no blee, an O wit no G, a pro wit no steeze
n a request wit no please, so i shine on like L.E.D's n never stop, unlike a tease
until i finish the written sheet, the shits complete, wit out a beat

[Haz]

i got more back then a motha fuckin camel n if u beef, heres a motha fuckin sample
try n run it, n ur gonna get trampled dishin out a handfull, servings more then ample
make a choice now n remember its a gamble <<-- Best bar

[M.O.B]

feedbak?

[Haz]

Put a Link Where u Left Feed.. Paste it Before Dat Verse...

[Brah-Vo]

Yo man .. this was ok.
But it was abit simple.
Put in some multis and up ya vocab. That's my advice.
But shit was straight. Keep up my dude

[Gutta]

Raiza i like yo Big L shit, but its a shame u prolly neva eva hurd of him or listened 2 him be4

[Gutta]

o and how u gonna say my shit was choppy?

[Omega Bill]

This was an alright drop, only things I can tell you to work on is stay more consistent with flow and expand your vocab so it doesnt seem basic.

Keep droppin.